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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Fettered by these four walls Bound with visions of dungeon halls Cursed by this circled fate As I listlessly try to find the gate The clashing sound of chains that bind Collapsing the very use of mind Leading not to know what’s safe Amongst the horror of this place Twist and turn to break these chains Remove myself from so much pain Find the link to set me free Allow me room that I can breathe I fake a strain then rip your heart Escape restrains to make my start And new light I will find this day With hope that I’m allowed to stay. Free [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 12-11-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This has been re-worked, yes? I like it much, and never underestimate the value of freedom richard. Enjoy, and have some fun with life. Love and hugs to you. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Freedom should be the first thing on everyone's holiday gift list! Excellent poem sir.  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rich~ ohhh, I like this so much! "And new light I will find this day With hope that I’m allowed to stay. Free" YES!  -SEA |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks Serenity and yes was very similar to one i had written recently had to go back and look you seem to know my poems better than I do. Thanks Sea and poet devine Rich |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah yes...break the chains that hold you...spread your wings and fly...great write Rich Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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