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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2000-12-11 01:53 PM


My mind a maze,
In a haze,
Such a daze,
My feelings on my sleeve,
Flowing down on the ground,
Seems I let them run amuck,
My heart beating rapidly,
So forelorn,
Seems it's caught in raptures scorn,
My eyes filled with tears,
Can't stop the rivers currents tow,
Taking me to places yet untold.
My mind a maze,
Turns and places I survey,
Yet end up at the same place,
They all look the same,
So how am I to find my way out,
Catch my breath and learn,
The meaning of my heart.

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1 posted 2000-12-11 01:56 PM


This is awesome........
Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-12-11 01:58 PM


Just let your eyes see what the heart wants them to see and you will be just fine my friend.  Your heart sees with the beauty that encompasses you completely and since people love to look at eyes, I can't think of any better way for you to glow in that special way that attracts even the hardest of men.  Now smile, and go give the world heck.  

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Startime
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3 posted 2000-12-11 02:02 PM


*sigh* oh yes, I agree with Mark, let your eyes see what your heart would have them see. *sigh* the heart shows through your eyes and is reflected in honest feeling there. MMMM oh yes, how love is. I wish it for you as I do for all. May love find all of use who are looking for it. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


Irish Rose
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4 posted 2000-12-11 02:38 PM


yes, the mind and the heart and this is all so true, but the soul is in your poetry and this one shines!



"Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version
of someone else." Marilyn Monroe


Cuddlez
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5 posted 2000-12-11 02:49 PM


Like this form... I dont think you ever completely learn all the meanings of love or what your heart sees though..
"My mind is a maze" what an intriguing thought!!!

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Rosebud1229
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6 posted 2000-12-12 12:48 PM


Thank you for all the sweet replies,love does often leave your mind in a haze, but with it their are many questions.
Daniel J D
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7 posted 2000-12-12 03:35 AM


Rosebud,
A sad one allright. Love is not something simple, it can make you smile, and it can make you cry. I find the best way to deal with love is to treat it with care, and to always be on your guard, for one moment it is there and the next it is gone.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Rosebud1229
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8 posted 2000-12-12 02:30 PM


YOur so right Daniel, love does sometimes seem to be gone before you even know you had it, love comes in many ways and guises, Yet I do believe through it all I wouldn't change anything about it. Thank you so much for your reply.
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