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What Love Is |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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What Love Is Karen Torbiak July 24, 2000 What Love Is it is the sharing of a sunset as it reflects in the eyes of the one you hold dear it is wrapped in strong arms as you enjoy the excitement and power of a storm it is walking the beach hand in hand in the quiet of a summer evening it is watching the sun rise and being thankful for a fresh new day with the one you desire it is seeing eyes soften as you look deep into the reflection of yourself through his eyes it is eyes that light as you approach with arms out stretched to hold and caress it is reaching up to softly trace the face of him who you have belonged to throughout eternity it is touching lips and feeling passion’s flame begin to rise as you claim sweet coupling breath it is sharing lovers desire as you show your love with touch, taste, sound sight and smell it is becoming one as lover’s bodies come together in wild abandon or sweet possession it is knowing there is one who loves and cherishes you with unconditional love it is giving of yourself completely without expectations that’s What Love Is Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I think Webster may be looking for you after this one. I don't think that his books give as in depth of meaning to the word love and I know for fact that it isn't as beautiful as your penning. Wonderful write and so beautifully complete. That is if there is anyway to completely define what love truely is. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
you paint such vibrant, vivid imagery with your words... i liked this line: "it is eyes that light as you approach" it just stood out to me. nice work. i dig it 100% "The bar is always open, the time is always right. If God's love and word go unspoken, then the music plays all night." |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is fantastic  "it is knowing there is one who loves and cherishes you with unconditional love it is giving of yourself completely without expectations" Yes, this is love -SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 12-11-2000).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Mark *sigh* you are so write that love is something that never seems to have a complete definition that is why I love to write about it so much. I always seem to find more ways to describe the way it would make me feel. Much love to you from me. Ethan Thank you so much. *giggling* if you read much of my work I am afraid you will get your fill of the images I paint for some can be very long. Much love to you from me. SEA Your sweetness ever gives my heart and spirit a lift. You love all that is love and everything in between. How delightful you are. Much love to you from me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
it is knowing there is one who loves and cherishes you with unconditional love it is giving of yourself completely without expectations that’s What Love Is This is wonderful.. Loved reading it .and reading it, and reading it again...Simply wonderful... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
very Good lady friend. You hit the nail on the head. Love and Light. Richard |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Had to sneak back in..this one goes in me library... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Startime, this is a beautifully expressed and written piece. It is so exquisite, it flows just like a stream. Ah this is excellant work it really is utterly magical. I love this, but as you know, I love love, anf love loves you too, I can see. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Great poem startime. I have felt the binds of love and you have captured it so well Rich |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Lady Lightning *giggling with delight* thank you, thank you, thank you. I am so very glad you liked it. Much love to you from me. Richard Hi there, sweet friend of mine. I am so glad to see you here and that you like the love that I write about. Many hugs sweet one, from me to you. Marsha *sigh* you are so very much like me I love it. I am so glad you like it. That is the highest compliment I could have. Much love to you from me. Spiked Thank you so much, dear one. How I wish it was in my life. *sigh* someday someone may love a Startime who has much to give. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
twas just touched upon by a star... *smile* beautiful poetry. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love this Karen! wonderful verses of descriptive feelings...so deep but so soft and beautiful.....great poem to read all the way through......ethome |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
** Well Startime...I guess (from you definition) I know first hand what love is afterall !!!! *smiles Joyce mutington/joyce "I can live by myself, but not within myself." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is perhaps the BEST definition I've heard...  |
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