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Open Poetry #11

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warmhrt
Senior Member

since 1999-12-18

Posts 1563

0 posted 2000-12-11 11:52 AM

I'll love you till the moon no longer rises,
Through changing phases, faces every night,
From silvery sliver into full and glowing,
Then back again; our love will make it right.

I'll love you till there is no longer sunset,
Warm colors dancing high into the clouds,
A fiery disc that sinks below horizon,
While love between us layers deeply now.

I'll love you till there is no longer rainfall,
From mists to gentle drops to soaking wet,
Like air is breathed, the rain is drawn into us,
Sustained by love, we will have no regret.

I'll love you till again I join the earth,
And my soul takes the long journey beyond,
Then my love will continue from that place,
Where we will once again become as one.

Kris

All good poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings...~William Wordsworth

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
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1 posted 2000-12-11 12:02 PM

*SIGH* this is gorgeous.......absolutely loved this one!

-SEA

warmhrt
Senior Member

since 1999-12-18

Posts 1563

2 posted 2000-12-11 02:19 PM

It sure is nice when one's words can make another sigh...

Thanks, SEA, for reading and replying to my words.

Kris

All good poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings...~William Wordsworth

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2000-12-11 02:28 PM

*sigh* yes these are words written to make the heart sigh. Wonderful, heartfelt and filled with love. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com

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