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Wild Colors (inspired by Bsquirrel) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Paint me in wild colors, bold sharp lines to contrast my eyes Paint the world around me, in degrees of blue I like the water....... Paint me naked, enjoying each brush stroke but keep your eyes open...... I want you to see as the canvas explodes ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whew! I am sure it will! I like this, and it's a library piece for sure! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
damn!!! whew is right ... paint me green ... cause I wish I wrote this  awesome sea-gator ... very cool poem .. very  Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, you little devil, this is sooooo hot, I love it, I really and truly do <  Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-11-2000).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ thank you! Mike's poem Soft Focus just sent my mind flying.....loved it!  Janet~ I ususally think that every time I read your poetry! Thank you so much! Mushy~ thank you sweetie! -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
makes me think of the commercial of a nude model..and the guys are pretending to me artists ..and the teacher throws them out of class haa...a funny one..enjoyed Sea  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Victoria~ glad you enjoyed -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Breaking out the body paints and yes of course they are flavored. My friend, if you keep writing like this then Santa won't have to worry about visiting Northern CA this Christmas...cowboy will volunteer to make THAT trip himself.< !signature--> A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 12-11-2000).] |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
WOW...and yet another to add to my quickly growing collection of your wonderful work... I must agree with JM...Paint me green right along with her..hehe...Loved it... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well, all I gotta say is ... sorry, too out of breath to say any more Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
SEA---he is just going to love this...just as I do! If he hasn't seen this yet, I'll sea to it that he does...if I have to paint his eyes open...lol....just remarkable! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ don't make promises neither of us can keep Thank you sweetheart LL~ So nice to me, you make me smile, thank you Interloper~ breathe, breathe......  Serenity~ thank you so much, I hope he does see it......I love the way he plays with words.....he is so creative.... -SEA |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
SEA, Very well done. I especially like how yours is considered "suitable" for this section, while mine, not about sex at all, was dumped. Gotta love that (stuff). All kidding aside though, great stuff. You're very good at poetry. Mike |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm glad I came across this |
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