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Wild Colors (inspired by Bsquirrel)

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SEA
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0 posted 12-11-2000 09:43 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


Paint me in wild colors, bold
sharp lines to contrast my eyes
Paint the world around me, in degrees of blue
I like the water.......

Paint me naked, enjoying each brush stroke
but keep your eyes open......
I want you to see
as the canvas explodes

~SEA~
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1 posted 12-11-2000 09:46 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Whew!  I am sure it will!  I like this, and it's a library piece for sure!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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2 posted 12-11-2000 09:52 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

damn!!!
whew is right ...
paint me green ... cause I wish I wrote this  
awesome sea-gator ... very cool poem .. very



Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know
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3 posted 12-11-2000 10:08 AM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Circe, you little devil, this is sooooo hot, I love it, I really and truly do
<
Take care
              Mushy
                

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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4 posted 12-11-2000 10:42 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Sunshine~ thank you! Mike's poem Soft Focus just sent my mind flying.....loved it!  

Janet~ I ususally think that every time I read your poetry! Thank you so much!  

Mushy~ thank you sweetie!  

-SEA
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makes me think of the commercial of a nude model..and the guys are pretending to me artists ..and the teacher throws them out of class haa...a funny one..enjoyed Sea

                ~Victoria~


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- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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Victoria~ glad you enjoyed   -SEA
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Breaking out the body paints and yes of course they are flavored.  My friend, if you keep writing like this then Santa won't have to worry about visiting Northern CA this Christmas...cowboy will volunteer to make THAT trip himself.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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WOW...and yet another to add to my quickly growing collection of your wonderful work...  
I must agree with JM...Paint me green right along with her..hehe...Loved it... ~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown
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Well, all I gotta say is ... sorry, too out of breath to say any more

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

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10 posted 12-11-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

SEA---he is just going to love this...just as I do!  If he hasn't seen this yet, I'll sea to it that he does...if I have to paint his eyes open...lol....just remarkable!
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Mark~ don't make promises neither of us can keep   Thank you sweetheart  

LL~ So nice to me, you make me smile, thank you  

Interloper~ breathe, breathe......

Serenity~ thank you so much, I hope he does see it......I love the way he plays with words.....he is so creative....

-SEA
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12 posted 12-12-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

SEA,
Very well done. I especially like how yours is considered "suitable" for this section, while mine, not about sex at all, was dumped. Gotta love that (stuff). All kidding aside though, great stuff. You're very good at poetry.

Mike
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I'm glad I came across this
 
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