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Kit McCallum
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0 posted 2000-12-11 07:43 AM


One Way to Heaven

Off into the distance,
Near the bright celestial sky,
Eternity waits patiently, for

Wayward souls to fly.
Awaken to the wonderment,
Yield willingly to Him,

Triumphant in the knowledge
Of a better world within.

Hold tight to your convictions,
Ever seeking kinder ways,
Attitude enriched with love ...
Vigilance portrayed.
Enter to another realm, lift up your heart to sing,
Nourished in the depths of love, that sweet salvation brings.

/Kit McCallum


© Copyright 2000 Kit McCallum - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2000-12-11 07:48 AM


Sounds like a wonderful prayer to me..
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2 posted 2000-12-11 07:51 AM


Kit, this is utterly wonderful, you are soooooo good at these you really are. Of course you are so good at them all, but these you are brilliant at. (It takes me ages to do these   and when I've finished they are still not great) Really excellant writing from you love, very well done.
Take care
               Mushy
                   


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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3 posted 2000-12-11 08:03 AM


Kit~
My, my ... what a lovely way to start my day.
Thank you for these beautiful thoughts.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2000-12-11 09:05 AM


Kit, love this wonderful piece, superb

Charisma

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5 posted 2000-12-11 02:35 PM



A beautiful, peaceful poem, how very creative and unqiue!  

Take care,
Melissa


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6 posted 2000-12-11 03:35 PM


Another one for the library...very peaceful.
Elizabeth
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7 posted 2000-12-11 03:36 PM


forgot to click on add to library...lol
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8 posted 2000-12-11 03:54 PM


Seems to me that you have all the answers in this one my friend.  What a beauty to be treated to on this wonderful day.  I am so glad to see you posting again that I could just let out a big YEEEEEEHHHHHHAAAAAWWWWWWWW just for you.  Well what do you know, I just did.  

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Oh btw...do you know what time it is?  No silly, not the time on the clock.  Yeppers you guessed it.  I think it is time for a little holiday challenge for you.  You up for it?  Good, check your other post.  I will have to go find it now and see what I can come up with for you wonderful muse.  Hope it has not gone on holiday yet.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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9 posted 2000-12-11 09:11 PM


Wonderful message, great acrostic! Love it!

Denise

Kit McCallum
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10 posted 2000-12-12 11:03 PM


~Nan:  Thanks Nan! I'm feeling a little of that Christmas Spirit lately!  

~Marsha:  Thank you for these beautiful words Marsha ... I really find I'm enjoying these. This one's a sequal to another I did in the Spiritual Journey's Forum the other day ...  

~Marge:  You are sooooo very welcome, I'm glad it started your day well my friend!  

~Charisma:  Thank you for this sweet response ... I'm so glad you enjoyed!  

~Melissa:  Just taking a peaceful moment to rejuvenate my soul Melissa, thanks for the lovely comment!  

~Elizabeth:  Thanks for commenting on both Elizabeth ... I've really enjoyed writing these!  

~Mark:  LOL ... thank you for this sweet reply!  I've missed you ... and I'll admit, you've got me stumped so far on that challenge ... I'm blanking ... ack! (but I'll not give up, better late than never, right?)  

~Denise:  I'm glad you enjoyed Denise ... and am very grateful for your sweet response!  

Much appreciation to all,
/Kit

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