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Passions Fire
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Passions Fire (Senryu) Touch of heat in you Lips and skin in lovers duel Melting into one Come my distant sweet Share our hungered feast tonight Passion fills our need Lips have burning want My skin tingles with you near Extinguish this fire. James Parker Haley Dec 11, 2000 |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
I certainly hopes this happens, Cheers |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Fire from weave burns deep Inferno of woven flame Your pen smolders on awesome Parker...simply awesome~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love it! I admire those who use form and this is original, haven't seen one I don't think. "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Wow, Parker...I love it...  ..Think I shall go "cool" off a bit...hehe...This is "hot" ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Parker...perfect! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
my, my, my...you do this SO well...loving it over here, parker. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lips meet, heat scorches passion explodes when we touch kiss me once again ~*~ Hey handsome, I think you've started something here.........these are hot! -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 passions, inner flames teasing touch by fingertips stirring trace of fire tender love inspire arise of sweet desire smouldering fire oh my...better stop, before passions needs to call a fireman...love your senryus Charisma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
mmmm..i should go take a cold shower...... be back later  gale"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Parker, am I mistaken or has the heat just been turned up? Love this one really excellant piece. I think I need to lie down. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
chk this out (my response to you...)/pip/Forum43/HTML/001484.html hugs, gale |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well now you gone and done it. The snow is melting all over the foums and I was so hoping for a white Christmas. Well penned my friend. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Whew - hot hot hot! I loved this senryu format poem. You have a unique talent for these Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sighing wickedly* you sure touched this Star's heat. WOW this was so sensually wonderful. Much love to you from me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Daniel, me too. Thanks for replying.Butterflies, love your senryu and the last line is great. Irish Rose, yes thank you, I love the multiple senryu/haiku format. LL, why cool off when you can have some heat. Sunshine, thanks. serenity, thank you, where is over here and how do I get there. SEA, I just love it when you girls get heated. Charisma, ah very nice. keep the heat coming. dg, thanks for that image... Marsha, heat stroke is that it... dg, hmmmmm and the heat just keeps on coming. oh, yes I really loved your reply poem Mark, sorry, its these senryu's they get the ladies all worked up. Melissa, thank you. Startime, another Canuck... thanks for sweet reply. Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 12-12-2000).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Aww, sweet poet, looks as though you've found her! *S* Core |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, keep it down you'll ruin my reputation as a playboy... Parker |
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