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CocoBaci
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0 posted 2000-12-11 02:06 AM


Distant Thought

Amid the silence of abandoned night
   A vision of emptiness one does hide
    Whilst a heart consumed with question......
     wondering why love must be tested

Within the shadows of lonely fog
      Is where a spirit carefully walks
        A soul containing such purity......
          yearning for one to hear it's plea

Between the rays of morning sun
           Tears of night are soon forgot
             Memory of yesterday......
               now a distant thought

    
  


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Daniel J D
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1 posted 2000-12-11 02:29 AM


Coco,
This tore at my heart, the feelings in this beautiful poem is amazing. Hugs galore for you. Hope you are well. Cheers

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

CocoBaci
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2 posted 2000-12-11 03:07 AM



hi Daniel, it's nice to see you stop by and take a peak at this rhyme and I thank you for the 'beautiful'....

coco

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-12-12 01:59 PM


Coco, please submit this one to the main site.  This is truely lovely my friend and deserves to be seen by so many more.  I am adding to my library but please please please submit it to the main site.  Do I need to beg?  NO?  GOOD!!!!!!!

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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SEA
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4 posted 2000-12-12 02:08 PM


Coco~ After my dream last night.....then reading this.......I am full of tears......this is beautiful!   -SEA
Aimster
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5 posted 2000-12-12 03:23 PM


this is beautiful! definitely one of
my favorite from you. simply wonderful
my friend!  

take care.
~amy~

Ethan Halo
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on the roof again
6 posted 2000-12-12 03:30 PM


stylish and sad sentiments of the morning after...
vivid, pretty, and teary.
the flow is most enjoyable

"The bar is always open,
the time is always right.
If God's good word goes unspoken,
then the music plays all night."


CocoBaci
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7 posted 2000-12-13 12:31 PM


MARK->you are absolutely too kind dear friend in your reply and you indeed have brought me to a tear when I read how you appreciate this... thank u sweetie so very much

SEA->I am touched by your reply and thank you PoetFriend... you're always by my side and for this I smile bright

AIMSTER->I have not seen much of you and I missed ya gurl...I'm happy you liked it too and thank you for stopping by

ETAN->A sweet surprise to read you came by and I also thank you for taking a peak at this lil treasure of mine

coco

ethome
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8 posted 2000-12-13 05:44 AM


Beautiful reflections Coco.. a real nice recollection of those distant thoughts that fill the poet's mind with distinct virtual imaged language....loved it!!
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-12-13 07:13 AM


Dani~
Your quill writes with feathered softness.
Cashmere phrases of thought.
Such enjoyment you lend to this circle of friends.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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brian madden
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10 posted 2000-12-14 04:05 PM


Between the rays of morning sun
           Tears of night are soon forgot
             Memory of yesterday......
               now a distant thought

Beautifully written, a wonderfully penned poem.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

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