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tulip
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0 posted 2000-12-11 12:53 PM


I enter in,
and look around.
The crowds are thick
the room is loud.

I start to feel,
a presence near.
I turn to see
who's watching me.

I gaze around
until I find,
your eyes I catch,
my knees give way.

I try to stay
across the room,
ignore your glance,
and walk away.

But each time I,
would catch your view,
you melted me,
and I did you.

What do we do?
We stay apart,
we've never touched,
except our hearts.



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kaile
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1 posted 2000-12-11 04:30 AM


so is this the way your soulmate has captured your heart?*grinz*

beautiful poem...gave an audible sigh as i read the last verse...

tulip
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2 posted 2000-12-12 01:46 AM


Thanks Kaile,
I've been good, so far...I'm trying to stay away from him, but it's really hard.  He and I can talk for hours and hours, and we both want each other, and we know it!  What do you do, but walk away?

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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3 posted 2000-12-12 02:38 AM


Tulip,
what an insightful write. Hang in there tempation lessens the longer we resist it.
Be well
Kethry


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau



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