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You Reached Me
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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You Reached Me Karen Torbiak 2000 Across the uncounted miles with soft words of understanding I am touched by the gentleness that flows from screen into my soul Unknown to me but familiar with a desire to know all that I lay my heart bare to you as I share my inner most thoughts I feel your spirit join with mine as your words flow into my heart our minds connect with warmth and love that fills us with acceptance You know who you are to me as your lips touch mine though sweet words, feeling the embrace of your arms pulling me close to hear your heart Our heart to heart and soul to soul as we explore, without limits the wonders of each other's love and let freedom to love rule us Touch me with loving words of truth as I weave you out of my dreams and into my reality that I feel across the miles We found each other with surprise and now our spirits soar the skies discovering our thoughts are one for dearest one You Reached Me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Another gem, Karen...some people have that certain something that reaches us. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very beautiful, Karen. It is true that there are kindred spirits floating around out there and, at times, a connection can indeed be made...and that's a good thing. You describe it very well...  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Star, this is beautiful and the flow of your poem just carried me through thoughts on page... Great write sweetie coco |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it a lot!!!!!!! |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
I agree with the others.....ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL POETRY!!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ JOYCE mutington/joyce "I can live by myself, but not within myself." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Startime, this is indeed wonderful writing, absolutely beautiful. It really is, veru well done Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yessiree!!! sounds like an on line love affair to me!! Well written Karen I love how you use the words to create intimate love to this person through the computer....great imagination!!! |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Simply beautiful..I loved this ..It's a keeper... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful Karen. . . it's always nice to reach out and know that someone's there. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderful poetry. enjoyed muchly. |
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