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Silent path

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spiked
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0 posted 12-10-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

A passage in this silent wind
Has left me where my dreams begin
Not in this world so filled with hate
No hope to let rely on fate

Causing me to look this time
For something that I wish to find
A passion for this life again
Not needing to look within

See the love thatís all around
My friends and family I have found
To carry me through times of need
And see all that my kids have seen

That we are all apart of one
As is the light onto the sun
And heart that pounds and shares one beat
And flows through all we see and meet

The passage to this silent wind
Thatís left me where my dreams begin
Not knowing where Iím soon to go
Now place my faith in you.


[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 12-10-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 12-10-2000 10:25 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

You've outdone yourself lovie.

Your writing is most awesome these days...as is your heart. HUGS.
Startime
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2 posted 12-10-2000 10:29 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

BRAVO!!!This was a fantastic read. I loved it. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com

CocoBaci
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3 posted 12-10-2000 10:31 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci


SPIKED, this is great my friend

I loved it every word.......

coco
Victoria
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4 posted 12-10-2000 10:59 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

very lovely ...enjoyed reading spiked..

             ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Ethan Halo
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on the roof again


5 posted 12-10-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

i like the journey portrayed here. very beautiful.

"I sound my barbaric yawp over the rooftops of the world."
-matching clothes are extremely overrated-
spiked
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6 posted 12-11-2000 04:36 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you very much Serenity, Startime, Coco, Victoria and Ethan. This time of year usually overloads my thoughts.
Rich
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7 posted 04-22-2005 08:40 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

what an ending!
 
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