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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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The Moon Shines Bright Karen Torbiak 2000 The moon shines bright this autumn eve filling the black sky with its glow, reflecting light to cast shadows on the blanket of snow below Gazing at it, I dream of you wondering do you look at it and think of me so far away sharing the same night sky, moonlit Fantasy flows around me now with desire to feel strong arms holding me close to keep me safe, held within your masculine charms I dream of your lips touching mine with gentle strength seeking deeply to taste the hot passion offered as I melt into you sweetly My heart softens with need of you, to see your face and feel your smile as your eyes look at me with love holding me close all the while The Moon Shines Bright in cloudless sky as stars twinkle with love's rhythm, I dream about a man of strength who will make me his for all time Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and a beautiful dream you have shared...well done... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
your words paint a most BEAUTIFUL picture. amazing sentiments. i like the rhythm on this too...good flow. I was thinking of the immortal words of Socrates who said, "I drank what?" |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sunshine Thanks, dear one, I am so glad you could share the dream. Much love to you from me. Ethan *grin* I am glad you liked the way this one went. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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