navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #11 » soft focus
Open Poetry #11
Post A Reply Post New Topic soft focus Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855


0 posted 2000-12-10 09:31 PM


She wanted me to paint a field of roses in soft focus
to hide the imperfections of thorns.
She wanted me to close my eyes when we kissed
to ignore the interactions of her tongue.
She begged the snowmelt to hurry and enter
the river, so she wouldn't have to see dirty thaw.
She closed her eyes whenever she walked forward:
it was the dumbest thing I ever saw.



[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (edited 12-10-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 MPC - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-12-10 09:53 PM


Mike...just don't let it become your HALLMARK....oh my? am I bad? guess I yam...
SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
2 posted 2000-12-11 09:39 AM


Wow......you have totally inspired me.....go find it and tell me what you think, please?   -SEA
Marsha
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
3 posted 2000-12-11 11:16 AM


Oh yes I really do love this one, a really excellant wonderful piece from you. Absolutely terrific.
Take care
              Mushy Marsha
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

4 posted 2000-12-12 12:36 PM


S'en, you are truly a card.

SEA, glad to have inspired something so cool.

Marsha, where were you last night when I needed support?  

Mike

Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
5 posted 2000-12-12 12:43 PM


Wonderful, I have to agree with the wonderful responses before me. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

6 posted 2000-12-12 12:51 PM


Startime, much thanks.

Mike

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #11 » soft focus

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary