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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Dreams by Richard Maxfield 5-14-99 DREAMS are like A vaporous mist Fledging thoughts With reality twist Invading the darkest Of my night Haunting till Morning light Sun rises Chases them away Only to return Before the end of day Shadows flicker In my mind Of another place Another time Dreams were once Reality A love shared Between you and me Dreams can Come true But not dreams Of me and you Hopeless thoughts Of things that pasted Dreams of you Will always last copyright #RM99R4 |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Richard, They can haunt you, but only if you let them. Always tough to say good-bye. Well done. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
richard, this was refreshing and an honest look at dreams. interesting spin you have created here...and left me with many thoughts to think about...thank you for a tremendous read. take care. ~amy~ |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
many a dream has haunted me....well said.... Greeneyes *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Shadows flicker In my mind Of another place Another time" I know this SO well.......feels like you snuck into my heart........excellent poem!  -SEA |
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