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Charisma
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Today's pondering
spirits mind of yesterday
shadows from the past
       ***

Yesterday's future
behind treshold of today
thread near tomorrow
      ***


Charisma

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1 posted 12-10-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Ohhhhh I like these!   -SEA
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2 posted 12-10-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Charisma,

I love the hope in these my friend.  May tomorrow be a better day.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats
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3 posted 12-11-2000 01:49 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Charisma~
Your thoughts are just lovely.
What a pleasured reading.
~*Marge*~


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Very nice.....
I like these senryu's....
And me think's you're way too good....

Hugs2U
Coco



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Interesting meaning here.... like alot.  

Parker
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Charisma,
I am glad that smile is still evident. Cheers

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)
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i liked the way these senryus make me think...it did take a while for me to unravel the mystery of these confusing gems...

write more
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8 posted 12-11-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Sea: I am always glad when you like it. you are a great friend.

Lone Wolf: thank you, and well allready feel better than yesterday. thank you for your reply.


Marge: thank you for your reply, you know that I always appreciate them from you.

CoCo: thank you, I am still learning,...but glad to know that you like them

Haleya: thank you for reading and your kind reply

Daniel:   thank you, you always make me smile....

kaile: I'm glad that you see what I mean..yes something to think about.

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I would have changed one word...but still...you leave much to ponder...

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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Very well thought out and leaves one with the feeling that given enough thought to life that there IS the answers we seek.  We only need to look at life in the right light.  Wonderfully penned my friend. Hugs to you.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Enjoy the read!!!!!!
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loved them Charisma .. nicely done..HUGS..

                 ~Victoria~

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13 posted 12-13-2000 08:52 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Sunshine: thank you for your reply, and....well which word would you change...curious to know now...  

Mark: Glad to see you around, and as I believe, without the past we haven't a future, we may learn from the past to build on tomorrow.

Vandana: Im glad that you enjoyed reading it.

Victoria: thank you for your kind reply, it's always nice to have your comments.


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very nice ones!
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