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last dance....tanka
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last dance....tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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words interlaced with the truth regret appearance to late for another chance no music for my last dance Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 12-11-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
So very sad......... wonderful write Charisma  -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you SEA.....its always good to see your reply's, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ I love to see you stretching into a variety of forms. *Hugs*, sweet lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Charisma, Sad, yet beautiful in its own way my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
glad to see that you are putting a personal philosophical touch into your tankas...nice work... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Charis~ Sad piece but a delicately beautiful one Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge: thank you, I like these forms....think I am addict on it. and thank you for your help, to correct some words. you are great. LW: thank you for your kind words. Kaile: yes can't help it, it was the way that I felt when I wrote it. tracie: thank you for your wonderful reply. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i thought of an Eagles lyric: "some dance to remember, some dance to forget." your words are sad but true. they stir my memories... well penned. "The bar is always open, the time is always right. If God's good word goes unspoken, then the music goes all night." |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
It's mind boggling what a few words can make you feel. This one got my mind thinking and my juices flowing. Nice work! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Ethan: thank you for your reply, christmas time is a wonderful time, but also the time to face myself. cruz: glad that I could make doing that with these few words. thanks for passing by and your reply. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Like this much!!!!!!!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Vandana: I am glad that you liked it. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so sadly beautiful. I love to read your wonderful work. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Startime: thank you for your kind reply, and I am glad that you like it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Charisma, this is soooooo sad but true, sweet friend, it saddens me to see so many hurt in these kind of situations with love and my heart goes out to them all! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah *sigh* |
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