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maxtec1
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0 posted 2000-12-10 04:27 PM



Kiss
By Richard Maxfield
8-31-2000


My Love
My dearest one
I reach out to you
It’s you only you will do
You know what I require
A drink from your loving cup
Feel my heart with in your hands
I need to taste the sweetness of your flesh
Make love to you and hold you as the hours pass
Bodies and souls entwined melting into one mortal flesh.

Lay with you through out the night until the morning’s light
Spending ever bit of energy on love and passion
Your heart and body close to mine.
Sleeping with you in my arms
In peace and contentment
Sharing the same dream
Breathing in rhythm
Awaken in passion
To start yet again
Your what need
Its only you
My love
kiss


© Copyright 2000 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2000-12-10 04:32 PM


Very creative..nicely done..enjoyed your words Richard  

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-12-10 04:54 PM


I like the way you wrote this..James
Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-12-10 05:05 PM


Some lovely lines Richard...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




KokoStewartKoomoa
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4 posted 2000-12-10 05:09 PM


Very lovely and creative! I love the design and the way it all fit so smoothly. Do I not know you from Starlite Cafe as well? You possess exquisite talent! I will look for more in the future!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



SEA
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5 posted 2000-12-10 05:26 PM


Richard~   Oh yes, this is very dreamy.....now I got the warm fuzzies!   -SEA
Irish Rose
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6 posted 2000-12-11 01:13 PM


This holds a lot of passion, loved the format and the way it held together....



"Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version
of someone else." Marilyn Monroe


Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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North Carolina
7 posted 2000-12-12 02:33 PM


I loved the format, the structure, and the easy way this flows , and it so does remind me of a soft warm kiss. Beautiful work here Richard.
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
8 posted 2000-12-12 03:07 PM


richard~

loved the way you structured this
and the sincerity felt throughout.
excellent piece written with your
heart and soul. simply beautiful!

take care.
~amy~

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