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Young and Old {Haiku}
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Young and Old {Haiku} |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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Cedar tree begins Taken from wild home, it thrives Bonsai dish new home Crooked bonsai tree Stunted dwarf confined in pot Twisted and deformed © 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa (All rights reserved) Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very good poem. I see so much more in it than the words. Love and light, Richard |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love these haiku's.....you have captured these bonsai very well. Charisma |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Charisma : Thank you for your kind remarks. Richard: are you the same Richard Maxfield from Starlite Cafe? I am an admirer of your work there. Thanks for reading my haiku and your kind remarks as well! Aloha!< !signature--> Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko [This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 12-11-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi the title pulled me in and im glad it did... i always saw bonsai as wonderful creations of art..never saw them as the way you depict...but i suppose in a sense its almost cruel to manipulate their growth..thanx for the thought... btw, do post more haiku....  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You have done these beauties much justice in your wonderful words. Your Haikus show much thought in them and you have done them beautifully. Loved the read. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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