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0 posted 2000-12-10 02:58 PM



Where ever you go........where ever you are
That is where I will always want to be
You are my love........my life.........
The depths of my ocean..........the other half of me

When you aren't with me.......my heart doesn't beat
I have no rhythm........I have no rhyme..........
Waiting to breathe again.......waiting to feel alive
Want you with me.........need your love sublime

Baby you turn my world.......hung the moon for me
........You put the stars in my sky at night........
When you are with me baby.........it's magic........
To hold you......to feel you......everything's right

.........Hurry home sweet baby..........
..........I miss you so much..........
......I want you......need you......love you......
........I'm desperate for your touch........

~SEA~


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1 posted 2000-12-10 03:02 PM


Gee Sea your writing makes me want to go find me a lady to love and hold. Deep sigh.  I loved this poem and the warm fuzzy it left me with. Great job.
Love and life,
Richard

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2 posted 2000-12-10 03:08 PM


Circe, this is fabulous, it really and truly is a wonderful write from you
Take care
               Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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3 posted 2000-12-10 03:13 PM


this makes me sigh ... and I aint even THE guy  
very sweet and loving Sea-girlie...
hope that hubby of yours get s back soon or you might self combust LOL
like your presentation on this...
but then I always have loved those (...)
later ... gator
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

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4 posted 2000-12-10 03:16 PM


Wow.SEA...another fabulous write from you..I liked..  ...I agree with Richard ..left me with the fuzzies as well...hehe  Hugs.~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

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5 posted 2000-12-10 03:19 PM


SEA~
You little romantic creature - you !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Richard~ I hope you find one soon...... thanks for reading  

Marsha~ thanks sweetie!  

Janet~ thank you, I'm happy you stopped in, he had to work today and I just miss him....

LL~ glad this gave you warm fuzzies  

~SEA

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7 posted 2000-12-10 03:22 PM


Marge~ you snuck in there........Thank you!!
-SEA

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8 posted 2000-12-10 03:45 PM


Sea....love this romantic piece.
your love is penned with desire, and
I hope that he will be back soon in your arms.

Charisma

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9 posted 2000-12-10 03:48 PM


You knew I'd like the style...still holding back with all of the unsaid words...

SEA...well done in my eyes...


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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
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Charisma~ thanks   He'll be home in a couple hours  

Sunshine~ you make me smile   I'm glad you liked this  

-SEA

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11 posted 2000-12-10 09:14 PM


Gee, and I thought you relly loved him  

The swells are running high on SEA.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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Interloper~ You know I do   thanks for stopping by   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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13 posted 2000-12-11 01:06 PM


Must be nice to miss someone that much my friend.  It shows the depth of your love for him and he is one lucky man.  Wonderfully written and loved seeing the romantic side of you again.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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14 posted 2000-12-11 03:01 PM


Mark~ thank you sweet friend.......my husband is one amazing man....... -SEA
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