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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
~Dreaming~ Dreaming of what I could tell you... I could tell you... You are the one who fills my life I love to see your smiles I love to hold you in my arms Your lips I love to kiss Softly, Passionately, Feverishly I could tell you... My heart skips a beat when you are near My soul is filled with contentment My skies are brighter You fill my days and nights With Stars, Hopes, and Dreams I could tell you... How beautiful the world looks with you here With eyes that light up the sky Painting heaven with your touch Creating amazing rainbows Of Beauty, Sunshine, and Life I could tell you... I have always loved you Before there was a you Before our eyes met Before I found in you Completeness, Happiness, and Passion I could tell you... You are the greatest gift in my life I cherish your love above all else You sustain me with your Freindship, Laughter, and Love I could tell you... I'll love you Infinitely, Without Boundaries, Beyond Time I could tell you... If only a dream this were not And if only I knew who you were. < !signature--> The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Gee lady I have written so many love poems to a lady i do not have a clue who she is. We seem to both have a dream lover out there some where. I wish you luck in your quest. AS I have the same one. Great writing I enjoyed the read. Love and light, Richard |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyLightning~ I like your dream~ 'I could tell you... I have always loved you Before there was a you' Now that is a dream waiting to come true~ And when it does ... you will know it without doubt. For ... the night makes wishes from the heart and we call them dreams.  Muchly enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I could tell you... How beautiful the world looks with you here With eyes that light up the sky Painting heaven with your touch Creating amazing rainbows Of Beauty, Sunshine, and Life ================= Beautiful images LL ... well written verse of the dream we all dream heres to the dream coming true ... for all who seek it.  take care jm jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed very much.. ..nicely written~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
maxtec1...Thanks so much for your kind words..Muchly appreciated.. I also wish you luck in the search for your dream lover...She's out there..I'm sure of it... ~LL~Marge...For ... the night makes wishes from the heart and we call them dreams...My-My, You are just toooooo good..hehe...Thanks for the sweet words, I muchly appreciate, and I'm so glad you muchly enjoyed... Janet...So glad you took the time to stop and read...Means lots to me.  ...Wouldn't life be way too boring without the dreams?I sometimes think it's the dreams that keeps me somewhat sane..hehe... Thanks for reading ,Muchly me thanks ya... ~LL~Victoria...Glad you enjoyed..thanks for taking the time to stop... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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lisad Junior Member
since 2000-12-05
Posts 22 |
~LL~ Words spoken so true, the ultimate dream in life. The one you know is out there and just can't seem to get out of your mind. The search for the perfect love. luv ya (cupts) lisad |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Hey Girl...Thanks for stopping by .. The ultimate dream, search for the perfect love..~sigh~ How sweet it would be to have both of those.. Glad you liked this..Matters , you know.. Hugs to ya... me too and yep--(cupts)... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
LL* This is beautiful...so soft and delicate woven with the softness that flows within your soul I have no doubt...my hope for you is that you find that dream and hold it tight and breathe life into it. Excellent writing~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
They say it's out there for everyone. You know what? I hope that's true... nice write - and welcome to Passions btw. K |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
BDC...Thanks so much for reading and for the sweet, kind thoughts... : "find that dream and hold it tight and breathe life into it".. Maybe someday I can say I did just that... We all know it never hurts to dream..Thanks again , your words are muchly appreciated...~LL~ Severn...Oh, it's out there, I'm sure of it... Thanks for the warm welcome and your kind thoughts, they are so muchly appreciated.. ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Romantic, romantic, romantic.......*SIGH*....this is wonderful -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now that is a dream worth pursuing even in this cowboy's eyes. Hold on to your dream and I am sure that someday you will find it. Beautifully presented and well worth dreaming about. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh no, it's a dream? I loved every word "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
SEA...Thanks so much for your sweet words..As much as I enjoy reading yours, it makes me smile to know you like mine as well... Can I have a ~sigh~ here as well?...hehe Thanks again..Much-Much.... ~LL~ Mark...My sweet friend..So glad that once again you stopped to read my work...You always know just what to say to put a "huge" smile on this face...but,then you know what to say to anyone to lift them up and make them smile, don't ya?... Glad I could make those cowboy eyes see my dream...Thanks for the sweet words...  ~LL~Irish Rose...Glad you enjoyed... Thanks for the kind words... ~LL~< !signature--> The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-11-2000).] |
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