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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-12-10 11:09 AM


Oh! How Much I'm Missing You

I'm missing you like crazy and I think I'm going mad
Everyone is getting happy and I can't even be glad
I'm missing you so much, I'm really aching just for you
Everyone is smiling and I don't know what I should do
I'm missing you insanely I'm missing your loving touch
I knew that I'd miss you, I just didn't know how much

I'm missing your voice speaking as I wake to the day
Everyone is delighted and I'm really not I have to say
I'm missing you, I miss the way you kiss me goodnight
Everyone seems so alive and I've lost you my guiding light
I'm missing you madly I've shut my life down for now
I knew it wouldn't be easy but I've lost my delight my WOW

I'm missing you, my arms are empty and so very sad
Everyone is cheery I didn't know it would be this bad
I'm missing your kisses my lips are calling unto you
Everyone is smiling broadly and that's something I can't do
I'm missing your arms ,I'm missing every piece of you
I knew I'd ache but Oh my how much am I really missing you


Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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maxtec1
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1 posted 2000-12-10 11:12 AM


I love this poem. I can so relate to the feelings in this. Great work.
Love and light,
Richard

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2 posted 2000-12-10 12:21 PM


Richard thank you muchly, I do appreciate it, truly.
Take care
                Marsha
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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3 posted 2000-12-10 12:54 PM


I think I get the message...where is he that he does not?  

Smiling at you! {~,^}


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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4 posted 2000-12-10 05:53 PM


Kari, thank you kid, he knows that I'm missing him, as you know love I can't do subtle.   But sometimes I just have to write it down.
Take care
                   Majestic Marsha
                          


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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5 posted 2000-12-10 10:44 PM


marsha~

ohhhh do i know how this feels! hang
in there like you always tell me. he'll
be home soon, i hope! i know you don't
feel like smiling but here's something
to make you smile...he loves you and
i betcha he misses you just as much. think
of all your wonderful times together and
how wonderful it will be to see him again.
that's what i do when im missing laura
badly. hope it helps you some. take care.
~amy~

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6 posted 2000-12-10 11:11 PM


*sigh* a feeling of missing someone you love is something I understand and can share in this wonderful poem. Thank you so much for sharing, it always helps to write it out. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


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7 posted 2000-12-11 08:10 AM


Amy love, thank you very muchly, it does indeed help, and I thank you for your thoughts. That was my yesterday down in the dumps day, but today I'm going for the uplifting thoughts, and they will help too. I'll remember what I always tell you, to keep my eyes looking to the light. And we will make it.
Take care sweetie
                Mushy
                  
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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8 posted 2000-12-11 09:48 AM


This is so upbeat for a sad poem...... I love it, kinda like saying I love you more than I miss you....Very sweet, sure to have him rushing back to you   -SEA
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9 posted 2000-12-11 02:28 PM


Circe, thank you love, it is more loving than sad, you're right
Take care
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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10 posted 2000-12-11 02:35 PM


Now my friend, don't go getting sad on us.  I am sure that he is missing you as well and will be back soon.  This time of year seems to take time away from those that we so desperately wish to spend time with.  Now how about one of those beautiful smiles and giggles from you for this cowboy my sweet friend.  If I have to, I will have Daphnie and Sue find your ticklish spot and give you a real going over.  hugs to you my friend.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Marsha
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11 posted 2000-12-11 03:00 PM


Mark my friend, thank you, I'm smiling I really am, don't set those two on me please. I'd never get any work done You're right this time of year there's so much call on your time, that you never seem to be with the one you want to be with. Never mind, I'll keep my thoughts and my attitude switched to up. And I'll concentrate on the reunion, and that will bring a smile to both of our faces and our hearts.  
                            
Take care
                 Mushy
                  
Thank you for the pep talk  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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