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On Your Wing [to the poet that might read this.....]
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On Your Wing [to the poet that might read this.....] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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On Your Wing see it, I know you do not the glint of gold on soft wing that with which you most tenderly extend to lift, with your poetry and in times of trouble, quiet the tear in times of distress, calm the fear in times of joy, lift voice to hear with your wings, you gather near I take comfort within your fold my eyes shine from your wing of gold and take pleasure as your story unfolds and grow in strength, grow in bold see it, I know you do not the glint of gold upon your soft wing that with which you quite tenderly extend to love when you come sing and grace my presence with thee and your songs of poetry Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and in times of trouble, quiet the tear in times of distress, calm the fear in times of joy, lift voice to hear with your wings, you gather near I take comfort within your fold my eyes shine from your wing of gold and take pleasure as your story unfolds and grow in strength, grow in bold ==================== yes ... exactly ... this is the gift of poetry ... and now your grace is written in gold ... excellent writing Sun...perfect poetic premise... your wings are looking good from here  jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, golden wings and a golden heart love, you have them both. Wonderful work marvellous astounding beautiful and so well penned. A fantastic poem love it really is, do I like it, no I love it of course I do. Truly a great piece from you. Take care kid Majestic Marsha < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Now just who told you about my Honda GoldWing~ ? Oh ... Santa ?  You know this is just a delightfully perfect little piece of your heart - don't you ? Of course, you do ! And me too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is for me! I KNOW it is! Huh? Well, it's my story and I'm sticking to it! It's ME!! (and I envy the poet it is really for )Fantastic words and thoughts, sunshiny one |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Must be some kinda person. *sigh* Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, there are so many things that poetry can do, you've laid that out extremely well. Do we not always hope that the offerings we bring might do one iota of bringing one to sing. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Karilea, What a magificent piece to first read this morning, your golden heart shines brightly this day, I loved this one, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Karilea, < !signature-->What a magificent piece to first read this morning, your golden heart shines brightly this day, I loved this one, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) some how this doubled oh well I meant it you are shining  [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--this poem is a winged with gold. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
SunShine.... < !signature-->You are awesome! Not only is this poem beautiful, it's very sweet. You've done a wonderful job with this one. Who ever you wrote this for I'm sure will be so honored, just as honored as I was to have had the chance to read it! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nine poets came to see if the wings were meant for thee and the answer is... Yes... if others come through the door the wings are for you as well Welcome in... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
from this poet to thee. . . many thanks. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Beautiful Sunshine..... Greeneyes *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* beauty do your words sing bringing light and love into all our lives. Look to your mirror, dear one. For you have golded wings. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You continue to weave an enchanting spell of poetry over me Karilea...and....I would have to say these wings are meant for you...beautiful and elegant as always my friend~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
One by one a heart's tears do cry As one is graced by your love Such beauty you weave in your poetic rhymes Sunshine, you're AWESOME add that to the praise we have for you... coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-11-2000).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, Thank you for the welcome, I am thrilled to be part of your beautiful words, like everyone else here at Passions. Cheers Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
an angel nudged my arm today said "not all have come in to read" and with heavenly wings lifted this back up This is for you, my Angels... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
From one with heart as pure as gold this poem is a gift I will always hold.... So dear to me as it was written by you, the one to hold us together, Passions Glue! Sunshine, you are wonderful!! and this is beautiful and library bound -SEA |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah....me thinks the true angel is she who penned this beautiful verse Hugs Ruth |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Glad i caught this one..lovely sunshine beautifully written as always.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, I'm not an angel but there's still lots more who will want to read this divine piece. So back you go love Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah look at all the angels that have come in for a peek little did they know these words for them did seek for they are the angels of the forums... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Karilea? Madame Serenity, psychic extraordinaire, senses the presence of a certain gold winged angel, and he just can't help himself, as he keeps coming back to read...winks and hugs to you dear lady! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful, Karilea! Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity, name of an angel who comes to read and bringing this back to Denise, who is another angel is disguise Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karilea I came in here with devilish grin Not in control of the mischief within. And then...... I read your words of thankful praise, So I polished my halo with the sun's rays, To say...... You made my kitty kicking seem less fun. Aren't you ashamed for what I've become? I'm undone.... But I like your poem... hugs |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
You don't 'need' my response - to know you've writen a 'golden' gem here - but I couldn't let it pass without telling you~S~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sunshine,I loved it!!!!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karilea, I know pure sunshine flows from you and in this write you've proved it's true your heart is matched by your gold pen so I stand say encore again. would that this was writ for me I would dwell in realms heavenly. I love it when poetry moves into song I have no words, be real, write on. Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
At the first, I must say there was no thought of kitty-kicking ways there was only herein an angel's grin LJA...change your ways.................and I've always liked you... Mr. Yeats..."need" is not here..."like" and "friend" is here indeed... Vandana..thank you... Kethry, when poetry moves into music, it is that much more captivating....we have lots to share...I am here for you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
such comforting words...i only hope that someday my words will ba able to do all the wunnerful things you mention in your gem.... thanx for the read...and this angel is actually your worst nightmare in disguise...LOL |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kaile, I seriously doubt you could ever be the worst at anything...because you came in here...and share much! Thank you... now this angel's not quite through looking into the heart of you for if you've read this far along know that then it's where you belong |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, (Persephone ) Ah I just had to revisit, besides the longer it stays at the top of the page the better I think. Beautifully written love. I know I've told you but it never hurts to praise more than once you know. Take care kid Majestic Marsha I'll only be a little exuberant today, yesterday wore me out Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is just so beautifully you...may I add it to my library? |
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artsygrl Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 55Florida |
very tender artsygrl |
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