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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I am in need of simple dress black--or gray... simple finesse... lapel with just a simple pin-- a spark of just one light within... and oh my mother.. let me in...let me, if you think I must... touch me. We'll begin again... "Mama? mama...'member when?" I am in bleed of sweet duress black--or gray simple finesse facing final love's last test-- can I be brave to hold the hand? can I be brave to understand? touch me. We'll begin again... "Daddy? dad?...remember when?" and o my god, we're near the end.... finally we touch, as friends, and o my god remember when? I love you. Always. Without end. I love you... Always. everend... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity...thank you, my dear...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am in need of simple dress black--or gray... simple finesse... lapel with just a simple pin-- a spark of just one light within... and oh my mother.. let me in...let me, if you think I must... touch me. We'll begin again... "Mama? mama...'member when?" I am in bleed of sweet duress black--or gray simple finesse facing final love's last test-- can I be brave to hold the hand? can I be brave to understand? touch me. We'll begin again... "Daddy? dad?...remember when?" and o my god, we're near the end.... finally we touch, as friends, and o my god remember when? =============== oh sen...this is..so perfect ... so very you. written in the poetic style with the sen grace that has come to be your trademark. this is my first read this morn... and how special it is ... what a cherish this one is and will always be ... as is the time spent "touching as friends" ... ya just blew a warm southern breeze me way baby ...me thanks ya me loves ya. me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
bravo!!! I loved it. i can relate to the feelings in your words. Great writing. Love and light, Richard |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Beautiful writings my friend. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Quite a lovely piece of your heart in this one. Remarkably well-penned. Touching tender - thoughts of remember. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sadly elegant my dear. You have a lovely style you know. |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
hi serenity me and the chickens thought we would come by and read some on our own. save sis reading them on the phone. looks like i picked a special poem to come find too if we are lucky we get the chance to become friends with our parents, this really is touching writing, im glad i got to see this and put it in my collection peace and poetry trisha and the chickies  my sister is the poet I am but a shadow. by the light of poetry I read then dream |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, Hold on to those memories my friend. Wonderful write. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
S'en, how dare you post such wanton sexuality on this site! If you don't know the story behind that remark, e me. Much love to you, and thanks for liking "my muse" so much.Mike |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! Thank you. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
simply wonderful serenity. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wanted to thank everybody...and just say that the beginning of the end is a difficult thing to acknowledge...but it IS best to do so....and thanks to the people who e mailed me...I'm fine...and as my dad said to me? "Every day is a gift..." Peace love and hugs. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
serenity... this is as beautiful as you are. such lovely words you have penned here though a bit sad. nonetheless written with your usual style. thanks for the great read! take care. ~amy~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice Serenity, Well spirited Rich |
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