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The Art Of Write |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The art of Write Daffodils and poet quills Stands and lay a window sill. Just above the greenery Filling all the eye can see. Slumped within a rocking chair Feathered quill conducting air Thinks a poet in deepest wile To write a line in proper style. Stirs and moves and blinks his eyes Thinking words in deep surmise Waves his hands in irate throw And growls a bellicose no. His phrase must be remarkable Multi meaning if possible Something that will sooth the mind Without a hitch without a bind. Critical poetic give And crucial if he's to live. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
be thou not so bellicose and away with thee, Morose... for in the Art of your sweet quill bring thee forth thy daffodil and to me, so crucial be to read the word of Sy, that I take heed... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Stirs and moves and blinks his eyes Thinking words in deep surmise Waves his hands in irate throw And growls a bellicose no. His phrase must be remarkable Multi meaning if possible Something that will sooth the mind Without a hitch without a bind. Critical poetic give And crucial if he's to live. ================ AND IT IS REMARKABLE... they ALWAYS ARE ... each one ... everytime must mean "hes" a POET ...  and those last two lines... poetic truth... poetic perfection ahhhh...Sy-wisdom before breakfast ... who needs food to sustain when there is poetry. *winkiewinkie* later-sweet-stinky-gator me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I love your writing here. Very good work my friend. love and Light, Richard |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Words from such a poet's quill Far outshine the poet's will It is not the mind that weaves The golden phrases that that it leaves The poet's heart it is that writes The verses filled with true delights And always will your glittering pen Mesmerize this poet friend Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You just keep shining and I'll be fine. *L* Janet Marie, Your words are mureen to my eyes and honey to my ears. I'll wash it all down with rasberry tea and I'll sleep like a baby. Winkiewinkie stinky. Maxtec1, Thank you Richard. Elizabeth, I'll take your words and make a potion that I'll drink just before bed, that should start a notion. Love Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You just keep shining and I'll be fine. *L* JM, Your words are mureen to my eyes and honey to my ears. And with some of your rasberry tea my dragon will sleep like a baby. Winkiewinkie stinky. Maxtec1, Thank you Richard. Elizabeth, Your words are so sweet I'll make them a potion To prompt a new notion Right before I go to sleep. Love Ya |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Feathered quill conducting air' How perfectly poetic is this thought. You're amazing, Mr. Conductor ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
How did I miss this one! It's poetry. "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Don't be stressing over it, Sy... Your words are ALWAYS brilliant...  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Slumped within a rocking chair Feathered quill conducting air" What a perfect visual this portrayed Seymour ... it seems you conducted a grand piece with this ... the flow and wording is once again, superb!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Irish, So glad you openned this one and thank you. Nan, And you are always beautiful. Kit, You are very perceptive, thank you. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Outstanding as always Seymour! Like your photo too! -SEA |
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