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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2000-12-10 07:18 AM



Hiding behind
my dark Ray-Bans
frees me
so I can be
someone
other than me..
a voyeur
perhaps
to see
with my vision
focused casually
lingering leisurely
longing lustfully
wandering
wherever it is
gratifying
visually
or satisfying
my desire
to not let you
see
who I really am

copyright November 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa (all rights reserved)



Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



© Copyright 2000 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-12-10 07:21 AM


I can see you in behind there you can't hide! I really like the idea of the poem! On the inside looking out!
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-12-10 09:14 AM


oh, but you cannot write poetry and have this too!!!!!!  



"Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version
of someone else." Marilyn Monroe


maxtec1
Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
3 posted 2000-12-10 09:25 AM


Very good writing. I see many pictures in my minds eye from your words pened. Thank you for the read.
love and light,
Richard

maxtec1
Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
4 posted 2000-12-10 09:26 AM


Very good writing. I see many pictures in my minds eye from your words pened. Thank you for the read.
love and light,
Richard

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
5 posted 2000-12-10 12:11 PM


My thanks to all for commenting on this "tongue in cheek" poem..smiles,Koko
( and you are right poetry gives you away)hehe

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2000-12-11 01:49 PM


Don't worry if you can't hide behind your ray bans when writing poetry.  We like what we see and don't even think of stopping because we will hunt you down and force you to write.LOL  Wonderful read from you.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
7 posted 2000-12-11 02:17 PM


Hunt me down and make me write?.... hehehehe

Tee Hee ..well if I don't write, my muse will bug me till I break out the pen. I am addicted to the write stuff! smiles, thanks for reading and commenting. hehehe Just one of my lil' devilish ideas, here... LOL


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



Cuddlez
Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
8 posted 2000-12-11 03:02 PM


I love using sunglasses to hide emotions... It is so much fun!...

Let your spirit take you where your body can't go!

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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