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Dancing Fairy Of The Night
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Dancing Fairy Of The Night |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
The fairy princess takes to flight, Dancing to music of the night. Her flowing hair and silky gown Glide through the air as she spins around. The enchantment of the stars above Sprinkle their stardust on songs of love. And searching through the mist of time For willing hearts and love sublime. Casting out her magic spells To lovers on a carousel. Within the flames she did ignite The sparks between two hearts tonight. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very pretty Eloise...this likes me... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Eloise~ This is just so lovely. The tempo makes for a wonderful read aloud piece. Thoroughly enjoyed it again and again. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you Sunshine and Marge. And somehow I knew you would like this Marge. It just kind of screams "MARGE"!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is enchanting, Eloise! Very lovely! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm ready for her to ignite my flames...James |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
This is very lovely and has a very wonderful meter. Romantic fantasy...I love it! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
tell her to cast some spells my way ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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