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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-12-09 08:47 PM


Please nurture my lips with yours
a little massage will make them feel better
tender and sweet.. just a little heat
from the pressure of yours against mine

taste of your sweet lips.. honey
makes me stir like a bubble bee
oh how i flutter oh how i stutter
you leave gasping breathlessly

why do i feel tortured by your kiss
from tip of my toes to soft burning lips
the hum of your voice..i have no choice
but surrender to the masseuse within you

squeeze me.. tease me.. kneed me
but please dont leave me..tonight

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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  



[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-10-2000).]

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maxtec1
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1 posted 2000-12-09 08:51 PM


Yes yes a thousand times yes. LOL sorry got a little taken up in your writting. WOW I loved it.
Richard

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2 posted 2000-12-10 12:23 PM


A thousand thank you's too Richard ha..so glad you enjoyed..


               ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


insect
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3 posted 2000-12-10 03:16 AM


insect poetry ~ excellent!
And here's one for you

Flying around the gardens delivering pollen
I was drawn to a flower its beauty was calling
I land to drink from the lips of her nectar
And guard this precious love to become her protector

I love her scent and pretty petals that glow
In the mornings birth she becomes a rainbow
But raindrops of life fall with her tears
His absents she feels and then insect reappears

This night he stays and her heart can't believe
As insect snuggles she raps around him like a sleeve
I do a love dance and she allows me to pollinate her
Then she blossoms with such beauty giving kisses with nectar


[This message has been edited by insect (edited 12-10-2000).]

Victoria
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4 posted 2000-12-10 10:20 AM


thank you very much insect..that was so lovely..the only time i see your poems are responses to me ha..beautifully written...

                  ~Victoria~

            


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Toerag
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5 posted 2000-12-10 11:42 AM


Hi ya Vicky!..Yanno?..
The bee is such a busy soul,
He has no time for birth control,
That is why in times like these,
There are so many "sons of Bees"

Victoria
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6 posted 2000-12-10 12:40 PM


HAA...i think you are right..

              ~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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