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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-12-09 07:14 PM



Just How Lucky Can I Get ?
~*Marge Tindal*~

He weaves the words of beauty
all across the pages of Passions
Never stopping to wonder if one
might touch the heart of a poet
in some other part of the world
He reaches into my heart and I
am much better for a peek into
his journal of his heart renders
Lucky~ me for finding the friend
I have found in you and may you
always leave me a piece of your
heart that is bursting with the
golden threads woven in poetry
from your heart my dear friend
And I have to ask myself again
"Just how Lucky~ can I get ?"

~Dedicated to the man behind the friendship~
Lucky~ ... you are de-keeper for sure !





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2000-12-09 07:18 PM


Wrong!  I'm the lucky one for reading this first! Nice tribute Marge!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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2 posted 2000-12-09 07:44 PM


Is his name Lucky? What a wonderful tribute!



"Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version
of someone else." Marilyn Monroe


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3 posted 2000-12-09 08:01 PM


Marge this is wonderful, and it's fabulous, it really is. A wonderful tribute
Take care
                  Mushy Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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4 posted 2000-12-09 08:10 PM


All right all ready... Blush blush blush... Marge, leave it to you... I think sometimes you must be able to feel inside my heart. That's SCARY... sound the alarm...

For everyone's information... My late mother's nickname was "Lucky" she was also known as "The Keeper" I have become the keeper of what family we have left... but my name is only dale wayne vansickle gwaltney. And I can write like a song bird or buzz some prose like a busy bee and you know that's why they call me lucky "dale gwaltney".
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Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
~Marge Tindal~


[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 12-09-2000).]

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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5 posted 2000-12-09 08:36 PM


Very good, my friend!  Well said!  Yes, he does weave golden threads, doesn't he!

Thanks for the warm tribute to my husband and his writing; and thanks for being my friend too.  You are a good lady, and a wonderful poet!

(And Dale said, upon hearing this, that "your words sure show it!")



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6 posted 2000-12-09 08:38 PM


Indeed Marge...lucky? I'll bet he feels he's the lucky one.  Great tribute.

jwesley

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7 posted 2000-12-09 08:51 PM


Seems to me you're a pretty lucky one to have found such a good friendship!
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8 posted 2000-12-10 12:50 PM


Karilea~
Thank you for jumping right in !
He is a wonderful poet, friend and gentleman.

Kathleen~
I think perhaps it is !
And I believe that makes me lucky indeed.

Marsha~
Thanks for the response.
He writes some mighty good poetry !

LUCKY~
The blush becomes you, my friend.
You know that the boundries of my friendship
encircle you and draw you in.
So just go ahead and surrender -  
For you are FRIEND.

You scalawag of a big ole soft-hearted bear.
Love you and admire your talent.

Rosemary~
You know I love you for being
the lady that you are-
for he loves you so.
Thank you, my treasured friend.

JWesley~
The name suits him well -
For he has confronted and beaten the demons
that would have over-taken a lesser man.

Elizabeth~
I am lucky to count him as friend -
and I know it.
~*Marge*~






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Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-12-11 02:23 AM


Bumping for my buddy !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2000-12-11 05:04 AM


and im lucky to read and bump this up

seriously though, thanx for such a fine introduction and rest assured i will look out for his work from now on

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11 posted 2000-12-11 05:46 AM


Margie my friend, he has most certainly touched your heart I can feel it in this poem. A very lovingly penned piece...well done  
Tracie~
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Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




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12 posted 2000-12-11 10:04 AM


wonderful tribute for one lucky guy....and he deserved it.

wonderful read Marge....love it

((hugs))
Charisma

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2000-12-13 08:49 PM


Kaile~
Then you will be the Lucky~ one, for sure !

Tracie~
His friendship is a gift of great measure.
Thanks hon.

Charisma~
Thank you for seeing what I see !
I happen to think he's a gentle giant of a poet !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum
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14 posted 2000-12-13 08:51 PM


Just lovely Marge ... what a wonderful tribute. Your words of friendship come shining brilliantly through these lines!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Paula Finn
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15 posted 2000-12-14 01:03 AM


What a sweet way to show your love for this friend...you are both "lucky"
lucky
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16 posted 2000-12-14 03:13 AM


Whose Poem is this anyway... I was just about to say thank you all and suddenly I realized it's Marge that deserves the credit... What nice things you have all said...

dale
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Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal

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