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maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
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Garland, Tx

0 posted 2000-12-09 03:32 PM



If Only We Meet
By Richard Maxfield
12-8-2000

What if we were to meet
And destiny calls our name
We fall so deep in love
All past becomes a blur

I would give my heart
Body and soul for you
To bring but a moment
Of happiness to you

Spending my every breath
To become closer until
We become as one
Mind body and spirit

Two mortal bodies
Uniting in love
Filling each moment
With the realty of passion

My love, my light
My angle of the night
My every thought focused
Dwelling of only you

Together transcending time
And all obstacles at hand
We move as if a dance
Under the stars is us

Do you hear my call
Do you feel my love
I know you are there
If only we meet

© Copyright 2000 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2000-12-09 03:39 PM


Richard~

*sighs* this is beautiful! very romantic
and full of love. thank you for posting
this, you have brightened my day...

take care.
~amy~

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-12-09 03:40 PM


p.s. welcome to Passions! This is a
wonderful place full of much talent
and loving people. Hope you like it here
as much as I do. Again, welcome

~amy~

maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
3 posted 2000-12-09 03:51 PM


thank you amy for you comment and welcome. I'm sure I will like it here.
Richard

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-12-09 07:51 PM


This speaks of hope and hope is the last thing to die.........it's lovely



"Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version
of someone else." Marilyn Monroe


Marsha
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
5 posted 2000-12-11 07:01 PM


Richard, this is really a wonderful and beautiful piece. Welcome to Passions, I know you will love it here. And excellant writing from you well done.
Take care
            Marsha
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


Lady Lightning
Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422
Kentucky
6 posted 2000-12-11 07:09 PM


Two mortal bodies
Uniting in love
Filling each moment
With the realty of passion

~Sigh~...you do this so well, so full of love and passion...My , My...how your words make me swoon...      ~LL~  
P.S. I'm still waitin' for 3,4,&5...hehe




The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Lady Lightning
Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422
Kentucky
7 posted 2000-12-11 09:35 PM


Just back to add you to my library...   ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
8 posted 2000-12-12 02:51 PM


once again your words are just like jewels,
they sparkle like stars, enchanting

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