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Mist of Sophistry
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Mist of Sophistry Blades of feelings grow in the meadow In the meadow of the morrows Of my sorrow. Emotions stand in a field of mazy Yes and no of petaled daisies Uncertain crazy. Sensations grip like the moist of mist Clings in a damp I can't resist It does persist. I seek the fields of the daffodils Flowers of my freedoms will To bring the still. But the meadows mazy misty Will have no part of sophistry. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Love your work however, I did not find the subtle argument. Help me. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
All I saw were the daffodils.....and they were free What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderful poetry. enjoyed. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 12-09-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nothing prettier than the foggy morn as the sun is breaking through the corn... at least, this is what you caused my mind to see... in all of your splendid poetry... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
in mystic meadow blooms your rose alongside the daffodils of your suppose amongst the mazy daisy in lifes garden grows forget-me-nots ponder the answers and reasons our search for love ...constant like the ever changing seasons subtle rains wash away the weeds of self doubt's treason ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ I do so dig your rhyme in the mist ever cool ~ ever wisdom kissed perfection of poetic tryst *winkiewinkie* Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, The subtle is in the sophistry, thank you. Irish, Glad you only saw daffodils, thank you. Mike, Thanks for the read and comment. Sunshine, Corn would do just as well, *L*. JM, Your understanding would be enough, but your poem wonderful. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
More beauty from the pen of Sy thanks for the read...  K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ And what a lovely bouquet you've picked. Didn't fool me - I saw those daffodils ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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