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Pressing Connections |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Pressing Connections I can look through that window of your mind, sometimes your thoughts overflow and reach me. Other times they touch me in such a way that my heart can skip it's beat, Not out of passion, but fear unknowing. You press the connections, my nerve endings, until they meet and rise to a warmth, Sometimes wondering why I have never felt before, the intensity of such... A longing, a desire, lustfulness? Not so, a pureness developing, a higher level of loving, one that presses, connects to one another Sending a current throughout, a flowing constant to someday fill an empty heart... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...to someday fill an empty heart... what more could one ask... I enjoyed... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
So many empty hearts out there, hope they all get filled! I like this.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A higher level of loving, yes, that should be the goal of every relationship! This is lovely, Wynter! Denise |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Exquisite expression Wynter! You've described this feeling in such depth and so very beautifully ... wonderful writing!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely! Vibrant and yet tender. Ah, to fill an empty heart, a prime reason for living. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning nakdthoughts, A'hhh, to only fill an empty heart must be a fulfilling moment when it happens. But perhaps that time will come again. Wonderful writing that I have read this morning. BC |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
One "flowing constant" is your writing, and I love it! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
and a wonderful feeling it is...HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sunshine- thank you yes..what better way to be filled *s PoetdeVine- would be wonderful if it was that easy, wouldn't it? thank you both ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Denise- I like the idea of a higher level of loving too *s thanks Kit- thank you for your reading and your best wishes ...the way things are going that and a prayer are all I have left going for me. huggzz ~Wynter [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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