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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2000-12-09 12:18 PM



we can always talk
but your soul you cannot caulk
I will be your friend
~*~
you have strength, you know,
willow bends but does not break
I talk to my friend
~*~
you shall never balk
as hand in hand we shall walk
while we talk, my friend


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2000 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-12-09 08:05 AM


friends come simply, kind
know what forever's on your mind
friendship always binds
~ * ~
camaraderie
holds together you and me
simple comes our song
~ * ~
in the blue is you
comes sweet light from my sunshine
in the written lines
~ * ~

Thank you Interloper!


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




kaile
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2 posted 2000-12-09 07:35 PM


lovely lovely lines...i am esp impressed with the line 'willow bends but does not break"
Charisma
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3 posted 2000-12-09 08:24 PM


wonderful senryu's my friend....love them

Charisma

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with you
4 posted 2000-12-09 08:27 PM


Interloper~ Very nice!   -SEA
Interloper
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5 posted 2000-12-10 09:20 PM


Sunshine~
au contaire (?) itis I who thank you  

kaile~
Thank you.  I didn't know you had esp  ]

Charisma~
Thanks for the read.  glad yo enjoyed.

SEA~
Yes, you are  


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Sven
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9 posted 2000-12-10 09:30 PM


this is wonderful my friend. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


CocoBaci
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10 posted 2000-12-10 10:44 PM



INTERLOPER........... a very nice write

coco

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11 posted 2000-12-10 11:03 PM


*sigh* your words flow with beauty and song. Very well done. Much love from me to you

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


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