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Parker
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0 posted 2000-12-08 11:49 PM


Whipped  
(Senryu/Haiku)

I’m addicted yes
Sugar sweet joy of the buds
Sin of supple cream

Delicate sweet dance
Chase by tongue and lips of mouth
Cream of taste delight

Hopeless need of it
Crave by day and night, oh please
Whip me some cream babe.

James Parker Haley  Dec 8, 200


    


[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 12-09-2000).]

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-12-09 12:08 PM


are you trying to insight a riot ???  
have you been in my raspberry tea???  
so ya got it bad for cool whip huh p-babes LOL

digging that second senyru ...
all we need now is a tub full of jello  
your too cute for your own good...
later-sweetteaseofsenyru-gator
jm

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2 posted 2000-12-09 12:43 PM



I'm still giggling at JanetMarie's 'riot' comment

Haleyja, this is deliciously sweet N refreshingly cool N soothingly delightful..

Thank you for this splendid treat oops I meant read
coco



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3 posted 2000-12-09 01:08 AM


HHHEEYYYYYY Parker....I stuck my finger in the bowl...wanna lick?
Parker
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4 posted 2000-12-09 12:51 PM


Riot.... yeah a whip cream riot..
I don't know where you gals minds are at.  

Parker

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5 posted 2000-12-09 02:51 PM


wowza   now this was quite an
interesting read Parker...lol. really
enjoyed this, very cute! take care.

Amy  

Parker
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6 posted 2000-12-09 05:14 PM


Amy, well another whip cream lover... cool.  

there's a play on words somewhere there I think..  

Parker

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7 posted 2000-12-09 06:21 PM


Parker~
Just
too

*wink*
~*Marge*~



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8 posted 2000-12-09 07:44 PM


I don't know where their minds are at but I do know that I can whip some cream for you.  Loved the presentation and I will have to learn how to do these things called Haikus and Senyrus.  Enjoyed the reading.  ~LL~

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9 posted 2000-12-09 08:52 PM


Hey Handsome  

"Delicate sweet dance
Chase by tongue and lips of mouth
Cream of taste delight"

I stuck my uh........my uh.......in the cream........  .........I have to remain PG so use your imagination ok?


These are very nice........( I see you in a cowboy hat and cream...........nothing else......)   -SEA

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 12-09-2000).]

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10 posted 2000-12-09 09:08 PM


James, just gonna say I enjoyed the heck out of the read...don't wanna put my foot in my mouth around these wild women.

See ya...

jwesley

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11 posted 2000-12-10 10:07 AM


heh heh..you dirty dog...

you write these things just to see how many women with dirty minds you can line up on their knees...i know about you lovepuppy...    

if i promise you cream....you wanna lick the, uh..bowl................  

hugs, g

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Parker
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12 posted 2000-12-10 12:06 PM


Marge, your a sugar lover too.. no doubt.  

SEA, me all covered with cream.... hmmmm, just how am I to get it all off.  

jwesley, go ahead they'll love you for it.  

dg, like I said before... its just a poem about whip cream.... where is your mind at. maybe you should describe what your feeling in more detail...  

Parker

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Sweetie.........I'll give you 3 guesses and the first two.....don't count  
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14 posted 2000-12-10 01:42 PM


Parker...I'm lactose intollerant.  
got any non dairy cool whip?

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15 posted 2000-12-10 04:22 PM



   love your mmmm ....sweet senryus

Charisma

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16 posted 2000-12-10 11:37 PM


mmm..no..    more detail would get us both kicked outta here love!  or...is that what you were hoping...................you devil!  

g

Parker
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17 posted 2000-12-11 11:45 AM


SEA, well I'm hoping it includes alot of whip cream licking.  

Martie, I sure do just for you.  

Charisma, hmmmmm thank you.  

dg, devil..... come on really.. what devil would be covered with whip cream.  

Parker

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18 posted 2000-12-11 11:51 AM


Parker,

This was deliciously, delightfully devilish, and sensuously, sinfully sweet. Loved it!

Kris

All good poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings...~William Wordsworth

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Correct!  
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20 posted 2000-12-11 06:35 PM


warmhrt, so your saying you have a sweet tooth too.  

SEA,   ok start licking.  

Parker

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21 posted 2000-12-11 08:23 PM


Naughty, naughty, Park!  Whatever will Santa think???

Core

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22 posted 2000-12-12 01:22 AM


ok, wait..i want in on some of that licking.....

lol....

gale

Parker
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23 posted 2000-12-12 12:14 PM


Corinne, naughty is as naughty does... Santa is probably saying go for it Corinne.  

dg, oh I got lots of whip cream left for ya.  

Parker

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