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Denise
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0 posted 2000-12-08 11:38 PM


The memories we weave along the way
Will always be a treasured tapestry
That adds a richness to the present day;
Although we sometimes long for 'used to be'
And wish with all our hearts to turn back time
We realize that we are powerless
To fashion yet again that special rhyme
And rhythm that had given happiness.
Perhaps those golden days we loved so well
Grant beauty that will permeate the soul
As we allow the now to weave its spell
To add a new dimension to the whole.

Remember that the past is but one part
Of all the loveliness within your heart.

Denise



[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 12-10-2000).]

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Parker
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1 posted 2000-12-08 11:52 PM


A beautiful sonnet from my favorite sonnet writer.  
Denise you rule.  

Parker

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-12-09 12:14 PM


Although we sometimes long for 'used to be'
And wish with all our hearts to turn back time
We realize that we are powerless
To fashion yet again that special rhyme
And rhythm that had given happiness.
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wisdom laced in a sweet sonnets grace.
wonderful writing Denise...
wonderful to have a poem  of yours to reply to...
our queen of replies..
jm

I looked into the sky for my anthem
The words and music came through
But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen
Looking into you

Eloise
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3 posted 2000-12-09 12:20 PM


What wonderful words of wisdom, Denise.  Great poem.  
CocoBaci
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4 posted 2000-12-09 12:24 PM



Oh Denise, I so much appreciate reading your poetry...

This one just shines and I thank you my friend for a touching read...

coco

Paula Finn
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5 posted 2000-12-09 12:28 PM


This is so beautifully written...I enjoyed every word
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6 posted 2000-12-09 01:26 AM


Denise~
Nothing like the rhythm and rhyme in a sonnet from you !

'Perhaps those golden days we loved so well
Gain beauty that will permeate the soul
As we allow the now to weave its spell
To add a new dimension to the whole'


Keep weaving, poetess.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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7 posted 2000-12-09 10:22 AM


Thank you, Parker, Janet Marie, Eloise, Coco, Paula and Marge for reading and for your lovely replies! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Denise

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2000-12-09 10:39 AM


"As we allow the now to weave its spell
To add a new dimension to the whole."

Many applause here Denise! You've woven beautiful sentiments into this sonnet. Such wisdom in creating tender memories to grow further within the "now" ... oh I loved how you described this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Denise
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9 posted 2000-12-09 11:57 AM


Thanks, Kit! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!

Denise

Nan
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10 posted 2000-12-10 04:19 PM


A lovely way to see the world... One of ever-building experiences that all add up to an eventual sum... whatever that sum may be..
Sunshine
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11 posted 2000-12-10 05:02 PM


Rhythm and rhyme...all a part of the warp and weave...

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Irie
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12 posted 2000-12-10 05:08 PM


Denise, I'm impressed by your words.
Not only are they beautiful, they are so true.
And you've put them together in a way that just seems to roll
off the tongue.
I so much enjoyed this piece of yours  


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Denise
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13 posted 2000-12-10 08:26 PM


Thank you, Nan, Karilea and Sheri for reading and for your lovely replies! I appreciate it very much!

Denise

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