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Hart Strings |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
Oh how you pluck my hart strings You have memorized the cords With each verse you play I lose me self a little more This mystic tune I can not brake free Each note brings me closer to my knees Verse by verse addicted more and more Will you not stop till I am a heap of nothing huddled on the floor Your guilty tune manipulates my hart I weep or laugh by your demand My emotions no longer mine to command How you timed this well I don’t remember the start I am your puppet You make me dance alone But in the shadows I see you There you are playing on This eerie melody You used to trap me My self is almost gone |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Will you not stop till I am a heap of nothing huddled on the floor Vivid, powerful line!!! Well done! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Good work...it's too bad that it's so easy for people to manipulate others. |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
Vas and Elizabeth, thank you both.  |
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