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Deer Haiku at Interloper's Request
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Deer Haiku at Interloper's Request |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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meadowlark sang sweet gold crested breast raised in song deer interloping by shy doe rushed on by song of meadowlark sweeter nature at its best to the hills deer ran meadowlarks taking high flight and black came the night Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine sings sweeter swelling my breast with such pride written just for me Thank you m'lady ... thank you. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
They're beautiful Kari... (Hey - like your smile my friend!)  K |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How can I not applaud poetry about that graceful, powerful yet gentle wonderous symbol of virility and strength....the deer??? You have done the species honor, sunshine  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i couldnt help being reminded of the cartoon "Bambi"... lovely images this brought to my mind..thank you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interloper, no, thank YOU for the inspiration... Little K...thank you SO much... 'Deer...how could I not...saw a prime example of a proud buck just the other day...only he ran the other way...but not before he looked me in the eye... Kaile...I think you hit the nail on the head...I still cannot watch it without shedding a tear...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kari, Lovely images you paint here, you have capatured the graceful motion of the agile deer. Such graceful movements Pure poetry in motion, Is this deer ballet? Nice work Sunshine! Dennis :^) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love poems about proud bucks!!! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Dennis, I'm so glad you saw this as a deer ballet and not a 'Dear ballet...can you imagine what might happen?...thank you... Kathleen...proud creature...so do I... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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