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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Eternally True Oscillate with me like the hand of pendulum... Forever in motion timelessly entwined Stroll with me like the grace of swan... Unmasking inner beauty a love pure and strong Prance with me like the stallion of noble... Unshackling fears nevermore shameful Cantillate with me like the song of dove... Melodiously harmonious poetically beyond Dance with me like the butterfly in flight... Releasing desires unison in pattern Until the arc of rainbow returns A heart will lay upon petals in forest seclude Dreaming of a love eternally true... *~coco~*  [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-08-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your works are treasures of beauty coco...I admire that greatly...and your verse is so deftly smooth and soft that I wish I could have your dreams tonight. Sighs and thank you's. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such a beautiful dream it is too. Wonderfully written with your incredible talent. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a beautiful painting, a poem ...more like a work of art. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
An eternal truth ~ you write beautifully! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
CoCo, this it fabulous, it really is, you have written a beauty here, this is trulu wonderful. I love it Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SERENITY, my sweet treat of a poetfriend, your comments have truly touched my heart... STARTIME, I'm sooo happy you liked this poem and I appreciate you kindness in reply... ROSE, your reponse means alot to me as your poetry indeed inspires me... INTERLOPER, your compliment leaves me breathless but I can still type so I wish to thank you for appreciating this write as this poem of mine is very precious to me... MARSHA, you're a darling ya know that hun and I love your enthusiasm and I so much enjoy your poetry too sweetie...Coco |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Coco, Nicely done with your pen and heart. Graphics are excellent and liked the total package very much. BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ What a lovely jewel I found in this piece. Your thoughts fall so softly on the page. Beautiful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Coco this is truly a wondrous beauty, words so exquisite, lovely write hon Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I loved the feelings this gave me. Wonderful writing my friend. Love and light, Richard |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is the work of a true artist.....great job!!! Nathan |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
As delicious to read as chocolate is to eat. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My friend....you have reached such new levels of late it is hard to imagine where you will end up. This was fantastic in it's originality of presentation as well as it's strength in the hope of a much brighter life tomorrow. Lovely and superb my friend. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
BILL, I thank you for taking a peak at this and I'm glad you liked the 'entire package' MARGE...I usually shy back in replying as you may already know (I enjoy more the reading and commenting) but I must say this THANK YOU dear friend for appreciating this poem TRACIE...As always, your friendly words bring many smiles to me and I thank you MAX...I am touched that this read was enjoyed by you and thanks for such a delightful reply NATT...Now you are way too kind to say that and I appreciate greatly your enthusiasm PROM... Such an adorable response PoetFriend thank you MARK...Your words of support and praise are so comforting to me you could not imagine the smile on my face when I see that you alongwith PoetFriends appreciate these verses that I share with you from time to time... |
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slipknot Junior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 25 |
Dear coco: Very well written poem. Although my style is more raw and to the point, this one caught my eye for some reason. Very nice Slipknot |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sweet melody ... play on! What an incredibly lovely flow Coco, and the language used, just superb. This is a treasure of beautiful words, just loved this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful thoughts...love the flow and its a real jewel for the blue pages, excellent work my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
you add such Eloquence to the words you write. Very nice Coco. Rich |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
you add such Eloquence to the words you write. Very nice Coco. Rich |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Coco, Breathtaking . . . the poem and the painting. Both are truly a work of art. Wonderful writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Until the arc of rainbow returns A heart will lay upon petals in forest seclude Dreaming of a love eternally true... so very lovely, the images of your words and the graphics too *s Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
PoetFriend Coco, this is another wonderful piece from you. . . every day, you amaze me more. . . Beautiful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Coco--Very beautifully written, sweet poet...a pleasure to read. |
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