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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Dreaming Fantasy Karen Torbiak 2000. I stand in the world of my own making between fantasy and reality spinning dreams of you being by my side wishing on the first star lighting the sky. Standing between worlds, not sure where to step wrapped in reality's fears of loss yet holding hope within my soul of love that is offered me from a far off land. I hold myself as my body trembles with the excitement that there is a bond, a connection not as yet understood but very powerful pulling us in. My eyes sparkle with the newness of life as heat flows through me filling empty veins with passion setting my body aflame dreaming fantasy in reality. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
I like the way you melded the fantasy with reality. Very nicely written piece. Kris All good poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings...~William Wordsworth |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
er, is it getting a little warm in here?  Whew! What a wonderful piece of writing this is! Many of us dream fantasy in reality. That's why we walk around smiling so much..  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Kris Thank you so much, I am so very glad you enjoyed it. Much love to you from me. Balladeer The romantic one. Just a little warmth here to share on a cold day. *grinning* yes I have noticed the smiles and have come to the conclusion that it is from all the love poured out from the most amazing hearts I have seen anywhere. Much love to you from me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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