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A Dragons Promise
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A Dragons Promise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Dragons Promise My dragon privileged me last night With a fantasy out of sight. He hinted a phantom control Would give me goal and save my soul. I listened with passionate will This bill of lading laid to quill. And he whispered things in my ear Everything I wanted to hear. Winked and blinked fascinating wile Hot erotic ecstatic guile Vow's that brought my kettle to boil With purest pure of olive oil. His breath went hot to coolest cool And in truth I started to drool. And I could not, myself to say Nay, you lie it is just your way. I turned from right to left in sleep And from my eye a tear did seep. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sy.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
NO one else could drool so damn cool  CHERRY KOOL-AID Drool me thinks ...*winkiewinkie* I brought a couple of me girlies from the mystic by .. to keep that randy dragon busy so you can get some sleep ... or NOT hehelater-lets make-chaos-gator me   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Ah Krilea, *L* JM, Whom else but you could be so thoughtful. Winkiewinkie Sy |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ooooh so wonderful Seymour, what images! Bonnie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bonnie, Thak you for the Ooooh. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I really liked this Seymour! Such a wonderful rhythmic flow and great visuals brought to mind ... much enjoyed this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Seymour! I enjoyed reading this! Nice to see your pic up there too! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ For all your Puff n' Stuff - this is a brilliant write ... 'I listened with passionate will This bill of lading laid to quill.' A most gratifying thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, Glad you enjoyed since you are one of my favorites. Denise, Thank you sweet lady. Marge, Always enjoy your poetic comments. *L* Sy |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very cool... you and our little_spyro_t_dragon should get together and compare notes  ..between you and his dragon diaries, i think we got some COOOL dragons in our blue pages! hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sir Sy, only you could bring that Randy dragon of yours to life with poetic verse An awesome write! Melissa~ |
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