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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2000-12-08 10:02 AM


A song that plays my heart
A box, the music dancer
A gift that thou impart
It sings, I know the answer

It sings of Christ the Lord
It sings, I must afford!
My heart is open now
And heard triumphant vow

A chorus, angels, deep
Melody, birth of King
And I, a promise keep
My heart shall ever sing

It sings of Christ the King
It sings, oh how it sings
My Lord, each note defined
In heart and soul and mind

The babe, in manger waits
As kings from far off lands
Their song resonates
So I may understand

The song of Christ our Savior
Brings forth stirred behavior
On waves, two thousand years
The song, my heart still hears

To dance and merry sing
The Lord comes here to live
New notes and chorus bring
New life for He forgives!

I sing of Christ Lord’s beauty
I sing no thought of duty
I sing on deaf ears fall
A song from birth’s recall

I sing of Christ the Lord
I sing I must afford!
May hearts be open now
Who’ll take up cherished vow?






[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 12-08-2000).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2000-12-08 10:04 AM


I will, I hear ya!



What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman



wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2000-12-08 12:03 PM


I too says wayout!
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3 posted 2000-12-08 12:08 PM


well done Walt..a very special day indeed

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Nan
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4 posted 2000-12-08 09:12 PM


Well, I certainly am glad I was cruising around here to find some good stuff... Find it I did.. This is a great holiday poem, walt... I like it, I like it...
wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2000-12-09 09:01 AM


thank yuh victoria and nan yuh i shoulda prolly uh put this elsewhere but i just wanted more peeps to see it yuh
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6 posted 2000-12-09 10:09 PM


Beautiful Walt!  
Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-12-09 10:24 PM


This, young man, is wonderful! I should hope to see this side of you more often!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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8 posted 2000-12-09 11:27 PM


Walt~
What a lovely song you've brought to life with your verse.

Joy abounds
amid the sounds
of voices singing
with the bringing
of praises ringing
full of the joy
of our Lord.

Thank you for this gift, Walt.
~*Marge*~


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dgvarner
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9 posted 2000-12-09 11:42 PM


very awesome walt--just beautiful! i'm sure i havent read you enough..!!

hugs, g

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wayoutwalt
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10 posted 2000-12-10 03:26 PM


all ye recent repliers
made me happy
aint no liars

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