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Night Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Shelters of the night released many emotions weeping from the heart sharing secrets with darkness tear down by pillows comfort Charisma |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Awwwwwwww...........this is so sad.....beautifully written dear heart  -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Shelters of the night..i like Charisma the best time to be sad..the night has a special healing affect upon one.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Charisma, These Tanka's are addicting aren't they? hehe. Beautiful writing .~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
SEA: thank you for your reply, I always appreciate them very much. Victoria: I agree with you, the night is the best time to be sad, than the healing will begin. rosepetals: you are soooooooo right....hehehe.....I can't deny I am addice on tanka's...mmmm think addict to all these forms.... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I really like this... sad but beautiful... lovely! -Tier |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yup, funny how we dare to reveal ourselves when night comes... so true,this tanka is...  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Tanka you very much Such beautiful writing for such sad thoughts. ((hugs)) Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
sad but oh so ever beautifully expressed with emotion. I LOVED THIS! Your lovely soul is revealed in your work...smiles Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
CHARISMA, you got me hooked... I hope you write more... I like I like I like... coco |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"Sharing secrets with the darkness" How sad and beautiful I'm not familiar with the tanka It's just lovely Liz |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Tiersdin: I am glad that you like it Kaile: yes the night gives her special comfort so we can reveal our souls. interloper: thank you for your kind reply, its always a pleasure to have some from you. Koko: thank you for this lovely compliment, and I am truly happy that you loved it. Coco: thank you, and I will write more, I love this form. glad that you like it.Elizabeth: thank you for stopping by, and Im not so familiar with it too, but I am learning, and love this form. We learn so many things inhere from each other. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful and tender sentiments Charisma ... such sorrow from so few words, wonderful expression! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you Kit for your wonderful words, and for taking time to read and reply. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Charisma, So sad . . . yet so true my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you Lone Wolf your reply ment a lot for me. |
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