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Broken Winged Angel

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Marge Tindal
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Broken Winged Angel
~*Marge Tindal~*

I'm just a broken winged angel,
trying so hard to forget.
Grounded and no longer flying,
cause I'm not over you yet.

I was flying high when I met you.
You billowed my wings with your song.
But, I didn't know you maintained two cages
and now you have left me alone.

Why is it when halos get tarnished,
sometimes they slip and they fall ?
Now to this broken winged angel,
yours has no shine left at all.

This heartbreaking tale isn't over,
but I'm writing a brand new ending.
Though your halo won't regain it's luster,
my wings will someday be mending.

I'll be flying high ~~
and it won't be solo ~~~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Paula Finn
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1 posted 12-08-2000 01:27 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

lady Marge I have a broken winged angel i would love to send this too if you wouldnt mind...this is wonderful...looking forward even thru the pain
Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 12-08-2000 06:36 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Marge* You've started my morning off with a
*sigh* sweet lady...this is bittersweet
weaving my friend...and the reason why you
remain one of my favorite weavers...Excellent
writing~  
((hugs))
inot2B
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3 posted 12-08-2000 01:57 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

I love the way you can write about heart break then turn your frown upside down and
show that smile of yours.
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Hugging you Marge...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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5 posted 12-08-2000 02:12 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Marge girl this is wonderful it truly is. I really love this one. Hugs and smiles to you,
Take care
            Mushy
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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6 posted 12-08-2000 02:14 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge,
So now you know even angels have mishaps. *L*
Sy
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marge
*hugs*  i know how this person feels.  for i am a broken angel.  that was my nic name.  and also is my icq name  =)  this is exactly how i feel.  and i will fly agian.  *hugs*  i loved this poem.  
love ya
jesse


Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart.
Irie
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Imagine that Jesse...it gave me goosebumps when I read it
and I wondered if she wrote it for you.

Marge, this is so sad, yet it sends a wonderful message.
One will never forget, but will someday move on...
I so much enjoyed this piece


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"


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Ah Marge, so tender ~ Soon new life will be sewn into this dear angel's wings...and oh, how she will soar!!!  Bonnie
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Go, girl!!  You tell 'em!  We may get knocked down, but beware of when we get back up.  I love this and it will be my "fight" song        
                 Love and hugs,
                     ME
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11 posted 12-08-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Amen ... and amen!

You are my hero, Marge.  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Marge Tindal
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Paula~
As I e-mailed you this morning -
you may share my writing with anyone who needs it -
or wants it ...
for that is why I write.
Thank you, my friend.

ButterfliesDC~
I can only say a very sincere ~ Thank you.

INot2B~
I thank you for that comment.
I think sometimes that I write to send another's smile
on that very trip.  

Karilea~
*Hugging* you right back, sweetie.

Marsha~
Thank you, dearie.

Seymour~
Ain't that the truth, sweetheart.

JesseJaymz~
Sweetheart, maybe - just maybe -
this one had wings to fly your way.
And yes - you will not only soar again -
you will burst forth in song. *Hugs*

Irie~
Thank you, sweet lady.
And it just might have been Jesse's spirit
that brought this one to me.

Bonnie~
Thanks, my friend.
So gooooooood to see you.

MotherEarth~
Alright, gal ! !  
I sense that spirit in you !  

InterLoper~
Well, as heroes go ...
I'll always be in your corner ...
I'll fight for ya' and write for ya' !
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                       noles1@totcon.com       


[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 12-09-2000).]
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i enjoyed the self-assured tone within the sad contents of this poem....such hint of confidence made me root for the broken winged angel!!
ethome
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You tell him Marge!! Maybe that halo will shrink and choke him! Well I love the idea of this one...Broken Winged Angel...I don't think you'd have to wait too long for another flying partner...ya got too much romance in ya kid!
Kit McCallum
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15 posted 12-10-2000 07:04 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Perfect imagery Marge ... you've set the scene beautifully here to bring wonderfully vivid pictures to mind. I can see her soaring now ... just a little bandaid was all she needed, and these sweet words of inspiration from you!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 12-10-2000).]
Marge Tindal
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Kaile~
Thanks for being in the cheering section !

ETHome~
Awwww !
Thanks !  I'm the flight instructor !

Kit~
I appreciate that.
I hope I do inspire those who may need the lift.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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  I must say it was quite startling to see my user name up there at first... But once I blinked a few times, I appreciated what the poem says.. And you were very right.  I enjoyed this a lot...  *adds thread to library as I "speak"..*  Thankyou for bringing it to my attention.  Always,  Nicole

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.
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*sigh of understanding*
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