»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #11
»
Letter across the sea
| Open Poetry #11 |
|
Letter across the sea |
|
|
Angel_of_Music Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 35Sanger, TX USA |
My love, are you lonely? Let me brush away those tears... My love, can I hold you? Should I let you weep in vain, all alone with so much pain? Somehow, you ran far away. Just when I, wanted you to stay. Come to me, let me be, the one who, can save you, Just let go! You know I will break your fall, Just let go! You know I can mend your heart. In your dreams, your world is still frozen. Don’t you know, that I need you too? Can’t you see, That I need you to love me, I’m not free, ‘till I can fly with your wings. If you feel, life can’t mean anything, Just let go! Just let go, just let go.... My love, are you lonely? Let me brush away those tears... "In sleep he sang to me...in dreams he came...that voice which calls to me, and speaks my name..." |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Angel_of_Music - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 A.O.M.* This is so beautiful....to want to give your all to a love...there is nothing that makes a better gift than yourself to the one you love...beautiful penning~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
||
|
desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
put it in a bottle and throw it out to sea, if it lands upon some distant shore it was never meant to be. but if he writes you back to say hello or chats past work is done, then you shouldn't worry much more than that. sometimes the heart must die to be reborn, and sometimes daylight reaches from dawn to dawn. |
||
Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Whoa, whats going on here, hmmm? You and Desperado in a conspiracy or something, and if you are, how come I didn't know about it? lol just kidding. Great poem Angel. almost reads like a song. Maybe put it to music? "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
||
|
Angel_of_Music Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 35Sanger, TX USA |
Thanks guys, Butterflies, thank you! Des...you know where my thoughts are. Saxy, ha ha, very funny "In sleep he sang to me...in dreams he came...that voice which calls to me, and speaks my name..." |
||
|
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Angel, I have to go with Saxoness on this one. . . the thought of this with music is a great idea!! Wonderful poem. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
||
|
Angel_of_Music Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 35Sanger, TX USA |
Sven, Thanks very much "In sleep he sang to me...in dreams he came...that voice which calls to me, and speaks my name..." |
||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"I’m not free, ‘till I can fly with your wings." ah yes, yes, yes, I love this and good to read something so fresh and honest. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
||
|
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
You write from the heart. It's easy to relate to this one. Good poem! Deb |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
