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shinamoon
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since 2000-12-07
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Daytona Beach, usa

0 posted 2000-12-07 08:46 PM



Now My Love


Kiss me now my love
for your lips taste sweet
and the tenderness of your touch
makes my life complete
Hold me now my love
for your strenght gives me hope
and being with you my love
helps me to cope
Love me now my love
for tomorrow i may be gone
and  all that will remain
are memories to linger on

© Copyright 2000 C.J.Lawrence - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-12-07 09:22 PM


Welcome to Passions, shinamoon! Lovely poem! Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions!

Denise

SEA
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2 posted 2000-12-07 09:38 PM


Welcome!! I liked this   Hope to see more from you   -SEA
Startime
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3 posted 2000-12-07 09:40 PM


*sigh* beautiful opening. Welcome to the most loving board on the net. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


Victoria
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4 posted 2000-12-07 11:04 PM


a very romantic tender poem..welcome to passions... enjoyed

                   ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Rosebud1229
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5 posted 2000-12-07 11:06 PM


Such passions in your poem, I look forward to reading more welcome
Butterflies_dont_cry
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6 posted 2000-12-07 11:07 PM



Welcome to Passions!  What a lovely entrance
you have made...weaving words straight from
the heart.  I look forward to many more from
your pen.  


The best and most beautiful things
in the world cannot be seen or even touched
---- they must be felt with the heart~
*??*

Sylvester
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since 1999-11-11
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7 posted 2000-12-08 06:34 AM


This is wonderfully romantic. I hope to read more of your work.  
Charisma
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lost in blue pages
8 posted 2000-12-08 09:18 AM


welcome to passions,

and love this entrane showing so much love.
looking forward to read more from your hand

Nan
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9 posted 2000-12-08 09:05 PM


Well then... Keep those romantic works rollin'...  

This is a good'n.... Oh yeah... Welcome to our Passionate world.. It's a pretty kewl place...

Irie
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since 1999-12-01
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Washington State
10 posted 2000-12-08 09:20 PM


The truth has been spoken.....
you never know if tomorrow will come.
Well said and Welcome to Passions....  


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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11 posted 2000-12-08 09:25 PM


Welcome to Passions, we roll out the red carpet for romantics such as yourself!!!

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman



wayoutwalt
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12 posted 2000-12-08 09:27 PM


woohoo this is an awesome first post yuh yuh
kaile
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13 posted 2000-12-08 10:32 PM


enjoyed your first post too...

and WELCOME

shinamoon
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14 posted 2000-12-09 12:03 PM


thanks for the support   much more to come





JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
15 posted 2000-12-09 07:24 AM


An excellent poem about love and living for the moment...James
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