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My Frozen Heart
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My Frozen Heart |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Trapped.................... beneath a layer of bitter cold anger confused - betrayed my heart wept Prayed.................... hoping that God would send to me the one that would cause my frozen heart to beat Again..................... ~SEA~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening SEA, What strong meaningful words in such short verse. I commend you for having your feelings come across as you have written. Yes, I find it very strong and very well said. BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Sweetie - I know your prayers were answered !  This would be a sad write ... if it weren't for the knowledge that your thermostat has been re-set ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice Sea, so much in such a short poem. Enjoyed. Rich |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BC~ thank you sweet man Marge~ yes, you got me there! This is a looking back sorta poem for me, reflecting on where I was, totally opposite to where I am now, thank goodness! Rich~ as always, thank you so much for reading -SEA |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
I absolutely love reading your work..So much of what you say and feel, I feel it, and hear it right along with you..Thanks... ~LL~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Whew! You had me worried there for a minute. I'm glad you clarified that this was from the past! Keep warm!! Denise |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
When I first read this my thought was 'oh no' then I read the comments and I can now say BRAVO!!!Love has found you and for that I am very happy. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What?!?! I'm too late again?  SEA, if it happens again, call me first...ok?  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LL~ Wow, thank you so much, that's very nice of you  Denise~ sorry to spoof ya, I was deep in the past last night..... Startime~ thank you Balladeer~ If it happens again.......I'm on the first plane to Florida |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- such sad and heartfelt emotions here... glad to know this is just a 'looking back' thing, and not the way things 'are'.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vicky~ I'm glad too! Thanks for reading -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, this is wonderful, it really is, you know I love this I really do. It reminds me of that saying you can't know where you're going until you know where you've been. I know you do know where you're going love, straight to the top. Marvellous work love, it is one of your best and I'm keeping this one, for certain. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Embers aglow atop the burning bark Winking, floating, in wisps of wind Star filled night lighting the dark Where love offers warmth ... for your heart to mend ====================== Just in case you can't get to the airport the next time. BTW...you would get more frequent flyer miles going to the hills of Kentucky I believe. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
pssssst.... I have flipped open this jewel of your's like five times and quickly read it each time and then I moved on thru the pages of archives and poooof here I fall back to this poem once more making it six sooooooooo.... I'm putting this in my library it truly speaks to me SEA and thank you sweetie for putting up with this long-winded reply but I thought you should know this as it reflects the praise I have for your poem...Coco |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sea~ Such a powerful poem in few words, but well chosen and effective words. I sadly relate to this and it touched me. I hope all is well for you hugs! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
So happy this isnt your sweet heart...but its still a wonderful powerful poem... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
SEa, this is a heartfelt prayer, one I've prayed, believe it or not, they do receive answers.... and the poems are really prayers themselves. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ SO sweet you are, always so kind, I just love you Mark~ Babe, I promise, if I ever get to this point again, I won't hesitate to pick up the phone and let you know I need some heat Coco~ I am grinning from ear to ear!! Thank you for the sweet comments Hugs to you!! Melissa~ I am so very sorry you can relate to this, it's hard to go through......I ache for you sweet friend Paula~ thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it Irish Rose~ yes, once in my life, this was my prayer.......thank you -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I almost missed this. Getting here is kinda sporatic lately. Well done and so very glad it is in the past. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
SEA.... This is splendid work! It has a certain power, and reaches into the reader. Nice writing, my friend....  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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