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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-12-07 08:14 PM



Flirtatious Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

Oh, flirtatious moon
in a petticoat sky
ruffles of Cirrus
around you fly

You skirt in and out
a flirt of a notion
with petticoats flurried
causing quite a commotion

Dropping your crystals
of prismed light beams
You flirtatious moon
the girl of my dreams

A halo of sparkles
you wear just for glowing
Oh, Flirtatious moon
your peek-a-boo's showing





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2000-12-07 08:18 PM


Evening Marge,

Lovely Marge, just lovely. And the art work is well, well, just great!

BC

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This is just TOO cute!! Big Smiles....... -SEA
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3 posted 2000-12-07 09:02 PM


Marge--You know that I love this..and you've been sharing the same sky with me...right down to the petticoats..I swear...only you wrote the perfect poem about it, not I.
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4 posted 2000-12-07 09:10 PM


Beautifully done, Marge! I love those little sparkles, too!

Denise

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5 posted 2000-12-07 09:14 PM


Marge, I love it when you planet heavenly!!!
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6 posted 2000-12-07 10:05 PM


Bill~
Thank you for enjoying this little piece.
It was a spectacular sky show this night !

SEA~
I just can't resist that moon when she flirts !

Martie~
Well ... as I left work,
Yes, Philip, I work !
there she was - peeking in and out with
her petticoats in full splendor.
You know me ... just had to write her.
I think we are the Luna-Sisters !
Love ya'- Coasty !

Denise~
Thank you.
It was a sparkling sight.

Balladeer~
I'd be willing to plantet one on you,
anytime, sweetheart ! !  


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2000-12-07 10:24 PM


this is just darling Marge..i can see
the whole sky doing the can can ha...

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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8 posted 2000-12-07 10:56 PM



Marge* OHHHHH I love this one....pure
"Marge-style"...in all it's glory!!!
((hugs))

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9 posted 2000-12-08 12:04 PM


Marge, this is a ssssssooooooo cute poem.  I love everything about it.  Thanks for the light-ness.  
                 Hugs,  ME

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10 posted 2000-12-08 01:09 AM


I'm glad I stopped in tonight to read such a lovely poem... and I didn't even peek at her peek-a-boo...   well...er...only a quick peek...
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11 posted 2000-12-08 01:32 AM


Victoria~
She really can .... can-can !

ButterfliesDC~
I'm tickled that you like it.
She was such a prissy little thing !

MotherEarth~
Thank you for a perfectly delightful reply.
*Heart-Hugs* to you !

Mike~
Got me smiling !
I saw you sneak-a-peek.
~*Marge*~


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12 posted 2000-12-08 01:35 AM


LOL at Mike...this lovely Marge...this is just heavenly...love the image of petticoats flying in the night sky...
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13 posted 2000-12-08 07:24 AM


Paula~
Yep, that was a pretty sight !
Thanks for stopping by, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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14 posted 2000-12-08 07:50 AM


oh Marge, this is sparkling flirtations....love it...


((hugs))
Charisma

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15 posted 2000-12-08 08:22 AM


Marge, this is just soooooo great. I really love it. Absolutely A1
Take care
                Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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16 posted 2000-12-08 08:42 AM


heheh yuh Marge you never disappoint
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17 posted 2000-12-08 09:28 AM


Your poems are a feast for the eyes!!!

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman



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18 posted 2000-12-08 11:11 PM



Marge-
   wow...this is absolutely beautiful..
   i just love when you write of the moon...
   nobody does it better than you..

   love and hugs,
   ~vicky




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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
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19 posted 2000-12-08 11:15 PM


Marge,
I haven't been around for a little while and one of the things I missed most were your incredible posts. Glad I didn't miss this one  .

~Susie


"Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?"
~Cinderella



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20 posted 2000-12-08 11:56 PM


Marge... a lovely lovely sweet write.  
Hey that's my favorite moon too.  

Parker

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21 posted 2000-12-09 12:10 PM


Marge, you never fail me.  Everytime I return you have a moon song sitting out there just waiting for me to read.  You know how I love this kind of poetry.  Thanks.
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22 posted 2000-12-09 12:49 PM



Marge, I just love your sweet style of write...

And my thanks for the smiles you bring along with your poems as you 'always always always' make ones eyes twinkle bright after reading your adorable poems...

coco

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23 posted 2000-12-09 01:22 AM


Charisma~
It tickles me to know you find it so delightful !
Thank you for thinking so.

Marsha~
I do so appreciate your replies.

Walt~
That gives me a smile.
Thank you - sending a *wink* your way.

Kathleen~
May you never go hungry at my poetic table, sweets.

Vicky~
You know I can't help it - she just sends
me these little sparkling moonbeams of delight.

Angel~
Well, I'm glad you're back !
Thank you for dropping in on me.

Parker~
Why - of course it is. *wink*

Eloise~
You are a doll !
I'm glad - so glad to share this moon song with you.

Dani~
Thank you so much.
Just knowing it's enjoyed keeps me pumped !

*Hugs* to all ! !
~*Marge*~




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24 posted 2000-12-10 06:46 AM


Well Marge all I can say is leave it to you to come up with such a catchy title.....I really like the style of this one too! Oh Marge you're just a flirtatious poet!! Flirting with all of our hearts(in a good way of course).
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25 posted 2000-12-10 10:12 AM


ETHome~
Thanks, love.
That little flirt of a moon was the cause of this one.
And now look what she's gone and done -

Glowing so brightly
increasing nightly
Such a skirt
of a flirt~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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26 posted 2000-12-10 10:44 AM


"...Oh, Flirtatious moon
your peek-a-boo's showing"

*chuckle*  

this is so sweet marge..i love it so much!  

hugs, g

ps...i see you and i are 'neighbors' now on tricky's homepage    nice to see you!



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27 posted 2000-12-10 10:46 AM


Oh ever so charming
forever so Marge...


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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28 posted 2000-12-10 11:58 AM


DG~
Thanks, hon.
Yes - the neighborhood is in good hands !
Vicky is such a delightful landlord, is she not ?
And the best part is - the rent's FREE !

Karilea~
*Hugging* you BIG TIME !
~*Marge*~



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29 posted 2000-12-10 12:07 PM


Marge...I have to giggle mostly everytime I read one of your works...Liked this one muchly...  ..Hugs to you..   ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

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30 posted 2000-12-10 12:07 PM


OOPS....she did it again...Sorry..hehe... ...  ~LL~

[This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-10-2000).]

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31 posted 2000-12-10 03:50 PM


always such a delight to read your words....   this really is wonderful Marge.....


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32 posted 2000-12-10 04:07 PM


Lovely poem. I did so enjoy the read. Great work.
Love and life,
Richard

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33 posted 2000-12-11 02:11 AM


LadyLightning~
Well, Lightning does strike TWICE ! LOL !
Glad you got the giggles.

GreenEyes~
Thank you so very much.

MaxTec~
Thanks, it's a favorite subject of mine -
and Martie's !
She likes slivers - I like full and flirtatious !
~*Marge*~


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34 posted 2000-12-12 02:07 PM


What a wonderful subject for YOU to pen about.  We all know just how much you love the moon and when she begins to flirt then we know we can count on you to as well.  Very cute my friend.  Doesn't matter if it is in little slivers or in the complete face of her, this cowboy loves it just the same.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Another for a friend ...
and ... speaking of cowboys, me Maga ... time for a visit, yes ?
YES !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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