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Flirtatious Moon

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Marge Tindal
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Flirtatious Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

Oh, flirtatious moon
in a petticoat sky
ruffles of Cirrus
around you fly

You skirt in and out
a flirt of a notion
with petticoats flurried
causing quite a commotion

Dropping your crystals
of prismed light beams
You flirtatious moon
the girl of my dreams

A halo of sparkles
you wear just for glowing
Oh, Flirtatious moon
your peek-a-boo's showing





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 12-07-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Evening Marge,

Lovely Marge, just lovely. And the art work is well, well, just great!

BC
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This is just TOO cute!! Big Smiles....... -SEA
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Marge--You know that I love this..and you've been sharing the same sky with me...right down to the petticoats..I swear...only you wrote the perfect poem about it, not I.
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Beautifully done, Marge! I love those little sparkles, too!

Denise
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Marge, I love it when you planet heavenly!!!
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Bill~
Thank you for enjoying this little piece.
It was a spectacular sky show this night !

SEA~
I just can't resist that moon when she flirts !

Martie~
Well ... as I left work,
Yes, Philip, I work !
there she was - peeking in and out with
her petticoats in full splendor.
You know me ... just had to write her.
I think we are the Luna-Sisters !
Love ya'- Coasty !

Denise~
Thank you.
It was a sparkling sight.

Balladeer~
I'd be willing to plantet one on you,
anytime, sweetheart ! !  


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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this is just darling Marge..i can see
the whole sky doing the can can ha...

              ~Victoria~


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- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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Marge* OHHHHH I love this one....pure
"Marge-style"...in all it's glory!!!
((hugs))
Mother_Earth
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Marge, this is a ssssssooooooo cute poem.  I love everything about it.  Thanks for the light-ness.  
                 Hugs,  ME
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10 posted 12-08-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

I'm glad I stopped in tonight to read such a lovely poem... and I didn't even peek at her peek-a-boo...   well...er...only a quick peek...
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Victoria~
She really can .... can-can !

ButterfliesDC~
I'm tickled that you like it.
She was such a prissy little thing !

MotherEarth~
Thank you for a perfectly delightful reply.
*Heart-Hugs* to you !

Mike~
Got me smiling !
I saw you sneak-a-peek.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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LOL at Mike...this lovely Marge...this is just heavenly...love the image of petticoats flying in the night sky...
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Paula~
Yep, that was a pretty sight !
Thanks for stopping by, my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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14 posted 12-08-2000 07:50 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

oh Marge, this is sparkling flirtations....love it...


((hugs))
Charisma
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Marge, this is just soooooo great. I really love it. Absolutely A1
Take care
                Mushy
                  


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Only a memory of the same
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heheh yuh Marge you never disappoint
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Your poems are a feast for the eyes!!!

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman


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Marge-
   wow...this is absolutely beautiful..
   i just love when you write of the moon...
   nobody does it better than you..

   love and hugs,
   ~vicky




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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
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Marge,
I haven't been around for a little while and one of the things I missed most were your incredible posts. Glad I didn't miss this one  .

~Susie


"Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?"
~Cinderella


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Marge... a lovely lovely sweet write.  
Hey that's my favorite moon too.  

Parker
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Marge, you never fail me.  Everytime I return you have a moon song sitting out there just waiting for me to read.  You know how I love this kind of poetry.  Thanks.
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Marge, I just love your sweet style of write...

And my thanks for the smiles you bring along with your poems as you 'always always always' make ones eyes twinkle bright after reading your adorable poems...

coco
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Charisma~
It tickles me to know you find it so delightful !
Thank you for thinking so.

Marsha~
I do so appreciate your replies.

Walt~
That gives me a smile.
Thank you - sending a *wink* your way.

Kathleen~
May you never go hungry at my poetic table, sweets.

Vicky~
You know I can't help it - she just sends
me these little sparkling moonbeams of delight.

Angel~
Well, I'm glad you're back !
Thank you for dropping in on me.

Parker~
Why - of course it is. *wink*

Eloise~
You are a doll !
I'm glad - so glad to share this moon song with you.

Dani~
Thank you so much.
Just knowing it's enjoyed keeps me pumped !

*Hugs* to all ! !
~*Marge*~




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Well Marge all I can say is leave it to you to come up with such a catchy title.....I really like the style of this one too! Oh Marge you're just a flirtatious poet!! Flirting with all of our hearts(in a good way of course).
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