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fractal007
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0 posted 2000-12-07 06:18 PM


OK, for all you people that have a PhD in poetry, I know this isn't one of the sacred muses.  I just thought this would be a cool experement to try - creating my own muse, and then invoking it for no apparent reason.





Tears of Gaia

Fall
Down
Upon
This low
And far down
World of mine, firey
Tears of the sky so pretty.
Fill this ignorant
Land with
Fear.

Fall
And
Consume
My heart
With knowledge
Of suffering and
pain of the people, unknown
To me, living in
Selfish
Dark.




This is my first invocation, so please bare with me.  LOL, I'm not sure if people even invoke muses anymore, let alone the sacred muses of ancient greek literature.  But it seems fun, none the less.

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-12-07 07:51 PM


This is very good, I like this!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-12-08 04:17 AM


Methinks this is magic...hardly the words of an apprentice my friend...(and I KNOW about these things! *wink*)
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