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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-12-07 02:20 PM


To love, to love, true
wrapped, warped in the depth of you
true, to love, to you

Wend your wit ‘round me
Take me in embrace of warm
Tickle me with kiss

Never sigh away
But instead by my side stay
True, my love, be you




Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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Marsha
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1 posted 2000-12-07 02:27 PM


Kari, wonderful this really is beautiful kid, utterly inspiring. I love it as always, you have dipped your pen in your golden heart and inscribed it here. Marvellous writing from you.
take care
               Majestic Marsha
                        
Ps I sent it this morning  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-12-07 03:52 PM


Thank you Marsha...for some reason, I knew this would pull you in...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




CocoBaci
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3 posted 2000-12-07 04:56 PM



SUNSHINE, this is astounding....

I marvel at the screen with such awe at the write you have shared with us...

Muaaaaaaaah on cheeks U rule gurl

Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-12-08 10:59 PM


Coco...you've got me giggling...now, back away from the screen, back,...back...there... {~,^}< !signature-->

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ





[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-08-2000).]

Interloper
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5 posted 2000-12-08 11:11 PM


a *sigh* closer now
ever closer, ne'er away
true to you, always



Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-12-08 11:49 PM


sing a sigh or two
sigh a melody or three
by your side with you

Thank you Interloper...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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