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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2000-12-07 01:14 PM






...You called me...
Now I wander into the deepest forests of life’s unknown...
I will stand at land’s edge and step into infinity at your command...
I will walk across earth’s deepest ocean,
to be ever near your voice...
I will come to you…singing of the new joy that has found it’s home,
in my soul...
All these things I will do...
I have and want no other choice...
For you called me,
and my heart listened...


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Write on!
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[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 12-07-2000).]

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Victoria
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1 posted 2000-12-07 01:52 PM


singing of the new joy that has found it’s home

missed reading your poetry here sunny
lovely thoughts indeed...HUGS

             ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2000-12-07 01:53 PM


You wrote and I read.  Wonderful!
Well done!


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-12-07 01:56 PM


Might I, May I guess at whose initials you've penned so beautifully?  Hummm?

Well done little shiny one!  Write on!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-12-07 02:12 PM


This is nice Sunny...James
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5 posted 2000-12-07 02:56 PM


Sunny1, these are beautiful words...

I have one small, tiny request....would you please clarify who those initials belong to???? My e-mail box can't handle many more requests of poets wanting to know if it's me!  

(not that I wouldn't mind  ...but I ain't got your number!  

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2000-12-07 03:00 PM


Well my sweet sister of poetry, you have really done and gone it now.  This was truely a remarkable piece and not only are we treated to your wonderful thoughts but we get to enjoy one of your amazing artistic creations as well.  So nice to see you and sorry that I have been absent so much lately, but you know that you are in my thoughts and prayers.  

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Paula Finn
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7 posted 2000-12-07 03:03 PM


Sigh...Sunny my sweet twin...you have done it again...penned right from my heart right to this page...love you girlie
Sunnyone
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8 posted 2000-12-07 03:46 PM


...... Need a chuckle today? ......
This is just tooooooooooo funny, and I'm sitting here appreciating this joke, even if it was on me, via my own computer!!! Anyone reading this after I post it won't get it, but maybe they'll enjoy, anyway!
When I wrote this one out this morn, I added in html a couple of dividers from my fonts. They were typed in with the initials 'MM'. Now, on my computer they looked great on the preview and the final post. But what everybody else saw was a picture with two big 'MM's under it!!!  So, my machine enjoyed a bit of technical humor at my expense, but actually I needed a good laugh!!   Just goes to show.......what you see is not necessarily what everyone else gets!! Ha!!

So......Sunshine......the only one I know with those initials is Mr. 'Deer, and he never calls me!!
And MM..........sorry about the goof, but we'll set the record straight here, ok?  Hey, guys.........stop flooding his email!!  
Hi Victoria.......so good to talk to you again. I've been putting my new website together and am totally addicted to it.....so I hate to admit that it's taking up most of my time, but I'll be back full force soon now.  
Hi Interloper.....I'll read yours, too...  
James.......I am so glad to see you! and thank you, too!  
Hi my Brother.......
Yes, I have missed you, but it looks like this is a busy time for our family, huh? We'll connect more often, I'm sure.....love you, too.......  
Oh, Paula.......you know we do read each other's thoughts more than is coincidentally possible...but that's what makes us twins!


.......Just had to tell Mr. 'Deer that those initials probably stand for 'Mighty Mouse', which, BTW is what I call my computer!!.......


  
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Write on!
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[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 12-07-2000).]

Marsha
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9 posted 2000-12-07 04:27 PM


Lil sis, hi there, busy you are and so am I so it looks like I've missed a great joke. Oh well as usual I'm behind the fair, but never mind. This is a fantastic delicious delightful and wonderful piece from you.
Take care
           Bubbles
              


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


Sunnyone
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10 posted 2000-12-07 05:29 PM


Hi big sis.......
Oh so good to see you here!!! Don't worry, I've been a bit out of touch as of late myself!!  But no time like the present to catch up, I say!!  Thank you for your always sweet replies.......


Write on!
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vlraynes
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11 posted 2000-12-07 05:39 PM



Sunny-
   LOL @ your computer...   don't ya just
   love it when they have minds of their own..
   i really love this one...
   enjoyed reading it..
   good to see you posting again...you've
   been missed...

   hugs,
   ~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Bill Charles
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12 posted 2000-12-07 08:02 PM


Evening Sunny,

Love your art work, and also the poems that you write. Nice to still read your work.

BC

catalinamoon
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13 posted 2000-12-07 09:19 PM


Ah, that special call, the things it can do to us. I'm glad you haven't forsaken us completely for adult  
Sandra

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14 posted 2000-12-07 09:23 PM


ROTFL!!! Thats hilarious, Sunny!!

(although maybe your computer is trying to tell you something.....ya think?   )

Sunnyone
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15 posted 2000-12-07 11:56 PM


~~~ Vicky ~~~
Yeah...this computer really got me good on this posting!!  Well, I am learning all this by trial and error, so it was a good lesson!!
Funny though that the letters were MM, as I dubbed this machine "Mighty Mouse"!! I'm glad you came by and liked this one, and I appreciate your telling me I was missed. I have a lot of my site up and running now, but it takes a lot of dedicated time. So, drop by sometime and give me your honest opinion.  Thanks again....


Write on!
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Sunnyone
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16 posted 2000-12-08 12:05 PM


~~~ Bill ~~~
Thank you so much.  I really enjoy the art, and it's double pleasure combined with words. Those are my two loves in life these days.  Thank you for your nice reply.  

~~~ catalinamoon ~~~
Nope....could never completely push myself away from the Passionate table, especially when it's loaded with goodies from so many new friends!  I'd sometimes like to go all directions at once!! Ahh, the choices!!  

~~~ Mr. Mr. 'Deer ~~~
Oh, I am so glad that you have such a great sense of humor!!  Actually, I love a good joke, and don't mind laughing at myself when the occasion arises....we are, humans, and humans are constantly imperfect!!  I wonder what this machine might have been trying to say?? Ha!! Thanks for the giggle!!  


Write on!
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Irish Rose
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17 posted 2000-12-08 09:33 AM


This poem is wonderful, so passionately written......Sunny, great job!

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman



Sunnyone
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18 posted 2000-12-08 01:33 PM


~~~ Irish Rose ~~~
Oh, thank you for saying those nice words, my friend. Yes, this held much passion for me, and I'm glad that it came through.  


Write on!
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