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SEA
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0 posted 2000-12-07 12:57 PM



Sometimes, remembering you doesn't hurt
~not like it used to~
I shed a tear
then flick it away
like it was never there...........


~SEA~

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1 posted 2000-12-07 01:31 PM


GR8 minds work in like manner  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


kaile
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2 posted 2000-12-07 01:40 PM


thought-provoking...makes me wonder why 'you" have ceased to be hurt...

i like this one..allows one to wonder and picture scenarios for himself

Effigy
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3 posted 2000-12-07 01:52 PM


Very well done. Screeming with emotions.
I like this alot. Keep it up.

spiked
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4 posted 2000-12-07 01:57 PM


Short and overflowing with goodbye. Lovely write SEA
Rich

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5 posted 2000-12-07 02:05 PM


Why SEA...how succinct!  I am impressed!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




JamesMichael
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6 posted 2000-12-07 02:09 PM


I get those sometimes...sometimes...James
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7 posted 2000-12-07 02:28 PM


nicely done!!!!!!!!!!!
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8 posted 2000-12-07 02:32 PM


Circe, this is simply sensational. So much said in such few words. This is wonderful and yes I love it I really do.
Take care
               Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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9 posted 2000-12-07 08:27 PM


I really liked this..Every now and then I get those myself, I love being able to "flick" them away..   ~LL~
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10 posted 2000-12-07 08:39 PM


Interloper~ I bet.....

Kaile~ "time passes, broken hearts mend"........  

Effigy~ Thank you very much  

Rich~ I'm glad you liked...

Sunshine~ I am very pleased, thank you  

James~ glad it's only sometimes  

Vandana~ thanks  

Mushy~   thank you!  

LL~ yes, it's that ability to flick them away, that feels so good  

-SEA

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